Question

【題目】假如你是李平，今年暑假去打工，參加社會實踐活動。請你根據(jù)下面的提示以 “An unforgettable experience”為題用英語寫一篇短文，以發(fā)表在�？�上。

工作地點	一家肯德基KFC快餐店
工作時間	四個星期，每天8小時
工作情況	我每天要起早貪黑地工作。當保潔員cleaner，工作辛苦且令人感到厭煩，我差點中途放棄。幸運地是，我的一個工友很幽默。他經(jīng)常講笑話來逗我笑，幫助我克服困難，由于我工作突出，經(jīng)理對我很滿意
你的體會	盡管我很累，但它幫助我更好地認識了勞動labour的意義

注意；1. 使用第一人稱

2. 不要逐句翻譯，可適當擴展，要求字跡工整，卷面整潔；

3. 詞數(shù) 100-120

An unforgettable experience

Answer 1

【答案】

During the summer holidays this year, I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for four weeks.

Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. The job was hard and boring, which made me nearly give it up halfway. Fortunately, one of my workmates was very humorous. He often told some joke to amuse me, which helped me to overcome the difficulty. Because my work was outstanding, the manager was content with me. Finally I finished the job before the new term began.

Although I was tired in the work, it helped me understand better what labour means. I think it is really an unforgettable experience.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語start off 開始；give up 放棄；overcome the difficulty克服困難；be content with對。。滿意；The job was hard and boring, which made me nearly give it up halfway.這個句子which引導非限制性定語從句；Although I was tired in the work, it helped me understand better what labour means這個句子中what引導賓語從句；