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【題目】Teenagers雜志Conversation With Brad欄目的負責人Brad收到了李華的一封來信。仔細閱讀下面的來信，幫助Brad用英語寫一封回信, 給出分析并提出至少兩點合理建議。

Dear Brad,

I’m a student from Xinhua Senior High School. I have some difficulty communicating with my parents. Although I have tried my best, I find it really difficult to make them satisfied. So I feel lonely sometimes. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.

Yours,

Li Hua

注意：1.可適當增加細節(jié)；2.不少于100詞。

Dear Li Hua,

After reading your letter, I’m sorry to know that

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Li Hua,

After reading your letter, I’m sorry to know that you have some difficulty communicating with your parents. I have to say that you are not alone facing such a problem. It’s a common problem shared by many, whose cause lies in what we call “generation gap”. Here are a few suggestions for your reference:

First, it helps if you don’t hide your feelings. You can make it a routine to share your thoughts with your parents. Second, it is important to convince them you have tried your best. It is not their fault to place high expectations on their child. I believe they will be satisfied with you as long as they know you have tried whatever you can to live up to their standard. Besides, it should be a good idea to love them. There is no one who loves you more than your parents in the world. Whatever you are, they will always be there for you. So love them, and love can heal everything.

I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.

Yours sincerely,

Brad

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為任務(wù)型作文，要求負責人Brad根據(jù)李華的來信進行分析并寫一封回信。寫作要點包括對信中提到的情況進行分析，提出至少兩點合理建議。故既要完成任務(wù)，又要兼顧形式的要求。

寫作亮點：本篇要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：賓語從句that you have some difficulty communicating with your parents，that you are not alone facing such a problem，what we call “generation gap”.It做形式主語，定語從句whose cause lies in what we call “generation gap”.who loves you more than your parents in the world.過去分詞shared的用法。等詞語。First, Second, Besides等連接詞。