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你的澳大利亞筆友Tom發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件，向你詢問(wèn)國(guó)家體育館“鳥(niǎo)巢”的有關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示給Tom回一封電子郵件，簡(jiǎn)單介紹“鳥(niǎo)巢”。

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	地 點(diǎn)	北京北部
建筑面積	5.8萬(wàn)平方米，可容納9萬(wàn)多名觀眾
開(kāi)工/竣工時(shí)間	2003年12月－2007年
外 觀	猶如用樹(shù)枝搭成的“鳥(niǎo)巢”
用 途	奧運(yùn)會(huì)期間可舉辦田徑、足球比賽
奧運(yùn)會(huì)后將用于各類大型活動(dòng)
Kofi Annan 的評(píng)價(jià)	“鳥(niǎo)巢”將成為奧運(yùn)歷史上一個(gè)建筑奇觀

[寫(xiě)作要求]

1. 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；

2. 短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入句子總數(shù)；

3. 參考詞匯：田徑: track and field event 觀眾: spectator 建筑: architecture

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Dear Tom,

In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Stadium — the Bird’s Nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.

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I hope that my introduction will satisfy you.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Tom,

In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Stadium —the Bird’s Nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.

The Bird’s Nest, which looks just like a bird’s nest made of tree branches and can hold about 90,000 spectators, is located in the north of Beijing and covers an area of 58,000 square meters. Its construction was started in December, 2003 and was completed in 2007. During the Olympic Games, we will host the track and field events as well as soccer matches there and after the Games it will be used for large events.

The Bird’s Nest is thought highly of by many people. Kofi Annan gave the thumbs-up to its design and said that it would be a wonder in architecture in the history of the global Games.

I hope that my introduction will satisfy you.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：你的澳大利亞筆友Tom發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件，向你詢問(wèn)國(guó)家體育館“鳥(niǎo)巢”的有關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示給Tom回一封電子郵件，簡(jiǎn)單介紹“鳥(niǎo)巢”。 地 點(diǎn)：北京北部；建筑面積：5.8萬(wàn)平方米，可容納9萬(wàn)多名觀眾；開(kāi)工/竣工時(shí)間：2003年12月－2007年；外 觀：猶如用樹(shù)枝搭成的“鳥(niǎo)巢”； 用 途：運(yùn)

會(huì)期間可舉辦田徑、足球比賽，奧運(yùn)會(huì)后將用于各類大型活動(dòng)；Kofi Annan的評(píng)價(jià)：“鳥(niǎo)巢”將成為奧運(yùn)歷史上一個(gè)建筑奇觀。要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全，把漢語(yǔ)翻譯成通順的英語(yǔ)句子，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。寫(xiě)作要求：1. 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；

2. 短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入句子總數(shù)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】The Bird’s Nest, which looks just like a bird’s nest made of tree branches and can hold about 90,000 spectators, is located in the north of Beijing and covers an area of 58,000 square meters.這句中使用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和并列謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)；Its construction was started in December, 2003 and was completed in 2007.句子運(yùn)用了一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；During the Olympic Games, we will host the track and field events as well as soccer matches there and after the Games it will be used for large events.此句使用了一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)的主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)和被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，并巧妙地使用了并列句； The Bird’s Nest is thought highly of by many people.一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)和高級(jí)詞組的運(yùn)用恰到好處；Kofi Annan gave the thumbs-up to its design and said that it would be a wonder in architecture in the history of the global Games.并列謂語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ)從句的使用將文章推向了高潮。

考點(diǎn)：考查電子郵件式的話題作文。