Question

13．假如你是李華，是英國某高中的交換生，你的朋友Tom 最近上課經(jīng)常開小差，不完成作業(yè)，有時(shí)還無故逃課，請(qǐng)按照以下要點(diǎn)給Tom寫一封信．
1、描述該同學(xué)的行為；2、他的行為將造成什么后果；3、表示愿意幫助他
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好．
Dear Tom，
We are good friends and I really care about you．
                                                                        
I am looking forward to your reply．
Yours 
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，用英語給Tom寫一封信．內(nèi)容包括：1、描述該同學(xué)的行為；2、他的行為將造成什么后果；3、表示愿意幫助他
．寫作時(shí)人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：skip classes （逃課）； absorb （吸收）；fulfill（實(shí)現(xiàn)）；let alone （更不必說）；care about （關(guān)心，在乎）；in the future（將來）
高分句型：1．①Your mind often wanders in class，②so you can't absorb the important knowledge the teacher gives us．
                  你在課堂上經(jīng)常開小差，因此你不能吸收老師教的一些重點(diǎn)知識(shí)．
                   ①該句運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯Your mind often wanders 增強(qiáng)了文章的感染力；②so引導(dǎo)一個(gè)結(jié)果狀語從句．
                  2．①There is no doubt that ②if you don't stop doing all these improper things，you can't fulfill your university dream，③let alone starting a promising future
                   ①毫無疑問…；②if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句；③運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯let alone 提升了文章的檔次．

解答 Dear Tom，
We are good friends and I really care about you． Recently，I've noticed that you are not behaving yourself at school．Your mind often wanders in class，so you can't absorb the important knowledge the teacher gives us（高分句型一）．To make matters worse，you fail to finish your homework and sometimes even skip classes for no good reason．There is no doubt that if you don't stop doing all these improper things，you can't fulfill your university dream，let alone starting a promising future（高分句型二）．Besides，you will disappoint those who care about you，for which you will surely feel regretful in the future．I suggest you change your attitude towards study before it is too late．
As a sincere friend，I am always ready to help．So just be open and talk about your problem with me．
I am looking forward to your reply．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)的提煉要全，關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對(duì)，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語法知識(shí)．