Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇150字左右的英語短文。

There once was a little boy who had a bad temper (脾氣). His father gave him a bag of nails (釘子) and told him that every time he lost his temper, he must hammer a nail into the back of the fence.

The first day the boy had driven 37 nails into the fence. Over the next few weeks, as he learned to control his anger, the number of nails hammered daily gradually became smaller. He discovered it was easier to hold his temper than to drive those nails into the fence.

Finally the day came when the boy didn’t lose his temper at all. He told his father about it and the father suggested that the boy now pull out one nail for each day that he was able to hold his temper. The days passed and the young boy was finally able to tell his father that all the nails were gone.

The father took his son by the hand and led him to the fence. He said, “You have done well, my son, but look at the holes in the fence. The fence will never be the same. When you say things in anger, they leave wounds just like these. And no matter how many times you say you’re sorry, the wounds will still be there.”

寫作內(nèi)容：

1. 以Anger management為題約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2. 談談你的想法（120詞），內(nèi)容包括：

（1）分析憤怒情緒可能產(chǎn)生的后果（至少兩點）；

（2）就如何控制憤怒情緒提出建議（至少兩點）。

寫作要求：1. 不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學校名稱。

評分標準：概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

Anger management

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Anger management

A bad-tempered boy finally learned to properly manage his anger following his father’s advice-hammering nails into the fence. And he was also made to understand that expressing anger strongly can do great harm to others. (36)

If anger is expressed in harmful ways, it can lead to problems, sometimes for you and often for others around you. People with poor anger management are more likely to have problems with personal relationships. What’s worse, they can experience anxiety, depression, even problems with alcohol. In a word, it can affect the overall quality of their life.

To keep your anger in check, you need to recognize what makes you angry and recognize the warning signs of anger in your body, so that when you are about to lose it, you can get out of the situation, taking a walk or using other distractions from the situation. But if you feel your anger is out of control, don’t hesitate to seek professional help from a psychologist or a support group. (131)

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求以“Anger management”為題，用約30個詞概括短文的主要內(nèi)容，然后用120個詞寫一篇作文，談談自己的想法。寫作要點包括：分析憤怒的后果，至少寫兩點后果；提出如何控制憤怒的建議，至少寫兩條建議。作文不能直接引用短文中的句子，不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；注意時態(tài)的正確使用；不要出現(xiàn)標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：

作文首先概括短文的大意：一個脾氣很壞的男孩在父親的指引下學會了怎樣控制自己的憤怒情緒，他也認識到自己的壞脾氣會給他人帶來很大的傷害。

范文使用了條件句If anger is expressed in harmful ways；不定式表目的To keep your anger in check；賓語從句what makes you angry；時間狀語從句when you are about to lose it；目的狀語從句so that you can get out of the situation；現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語taking a walk等重點語法知識，使作文句式多樣，避免了句式單一、表達單調(diào)；

范文使用了較多的短語和固定搭配：lead to, be likely to do, out of control, hesitate to, seek...from等，使作文內(nèi)容得到充實；

范文還注意使用What’s worse, In a word等短語來銜接句子，使句意通順、連接緊密。

考點：材料作文