Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(___)，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street, he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Allee to escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible

Answer 1

【小題1】surprising→surprised
【小題2】has→had
【小題3】such→so
【小題4】to 去掉
【小題5】while→when
【小題6】them→→him
【小題7】or→and
【小題8】operation前加an
【小題9】dangers→danger
【小題10】sincere→sincerely

解析試題分析：短文是關(guān)于作者的朋友Allee出意外的事情。Allee一向小心，每次都要等綠燈才過(guò)馬路，但是那天他在過(guò)馬路時(shí)卻被突然出現(xiàn)的車撞了，意外發(fā)生后他立刻被送到附近的醫(yī)院。當(dāng)作者去探望他的時(shí)候，他雖然脫離了危險(xiǎn)但是面色仍然蒼白。
【小題1】考查形容詞用法。I was surprising to hear that…。surprising 意思是“令人驚訝的”，此處是說(shuō)明主語(yǔ)“我”的情況，應(yīng)該用surprised表示人感到驚訝的，所以把surprising改為surprised.。
【小題2】考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been hit by a car 。主句用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，賓語(yǔ)從句應(yīng)該也用過(guò)去時(shí)的某種形式，所以把現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)改為過(guò)去完成時(shí)，故把has改為had。
【小題3】考查副詞辨析。he was such careful that he didn’t go… such 用來(lái)修飾名詞，而careful是形容詞，應(yīng)該用so來(lái)修飾。所以把such改為so。
【小題4】考查非謂語(yǔ)用法。he saw the traffic light to turn green. See sb do sth “看見某人做某事”，see 后面應(yīng)該用省去to 的不定式做賓補(bǔ)，所以把to 去掉。
【小題5】考查連詞用法。But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car …此處是固定句型 hardly…when 表示“一。。。就，”句意：他剛到路中央，這時(shí)看到一輛車開了過(guò)來(lái)，所以把while改為when。
【小題6】考查代詞用法。he saw a car suddenly appear on his right-hand side and come directly towards them.從上文可知汽車是朝他沖過(guò)來(lái)，所以把them改為him。
【小題7】考查連詞用法。He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away.“ He was hit by the car”和”was thrown a few meters away”，應(yīng)該是順承關(guān)系，所以把or改為and。
【小題8】考查冠詞用法。He was sent to the nearest hospital immediately and had operation .operation是可數(shù)名詞，所以前面加冠詞an。
【小題9】考查冠詞用法。he was out of dangers 。out of danger 是固定短語(yǔ)“脫離危險(xiǎn)”，在短語(yǔ)中danger是抽象名詞，所以把dangers改為danger。
【小題10】考查副詞用法。I sincere hope he will recover 。此處sincere是修飾動(dòng)詞hope的，所以應(yīng)該用副詞形式。把sincere改為sincerely。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。