Question

19．假如你是紅星中學學生會主席李明，根據(jù)學校安排，你給即將到你校任教的外籍教師Jack推薦一名學生助手（assistant）．請根據(jù)所給提示用英文給Jack寫封推薦信．
1．歡迎Jack的到來；
2．推薦劉佳做學生助手；
3．劉佳的基本情況（18歲，高三學生，學校十佳學生）：
4．劉佳的特點與特長（活潑、樂觀；電腦技能；溝通能力；英語水平等）．
注意：詞數(shù)：100；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others．
她是一個電腦技能嫻熟的聰明的女孩，并且她還有和他人很好的溝通的能力．
高分句型二：
If you have any questions about it，please contact me．
如果你有任何的疑問，請給我打電話．
句型一 who can use the computer skillfully and…該句是一個由who 引導的定語從句，who在從句中充當主語，代替前面的先行詞girl
句型二 ①If you have any questions about it該句是一個由if引導的條件狀語從句 ②please contact me 此為祈使句
除此以外，還有以下重要短語：communicate with    what's more    look forward to

解答 Dear Jack，
    I'm Li Ming，Chairman of the students'Union of Hongxing Middle School．It's great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term．（表達歡迎）
    I was asked to write to you to recommend Liu Jia，a Senior 3 student of 18，to be your assistant．Liu Jia is a friendly，active and optimistic girl．She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others．（高分句型一）What's more，she is one of the top ten students in our school，and her spoken English is extremely excellent．I'm sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China．（介紹情況）
   If you have any questions about it，please contact me．（高分句型二）
   I'm looking forward to your coming．
  Yours，
  Li Ming

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，考生在完成該類作文的時候應注意用準確的、簡明扼要的語言將題干部分規(guī)定的要點闡述清楚，且適當?shù)氖褂酶呒壴~匯和句型．