Question

【題目】假設(shè)你叫李華,你們學(xué)校開展了“網(wǎng)絡(luò)課堂”計(jì)劃，同學(xué)們可以通過校園網(wǎng)互相幫助，解決學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的困難。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一封電子郵件給你的外國(guó)筆友Jason ，向他介紹“網(wǎng)絡(luò)課堂”計(jì)劃。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1．可以通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)課堂結(jié)成學(xué)習(xí)互助小組；

2．可以在論壇（forum）上發(fā)帖子，討論學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的困難；

3．定期組織活動(dòng)，交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)。

注意：

1．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上所有信息。

2．詞數(shù)：100-120左右。信的開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jason,

I’d like to tell you about the “Network Class Plan” in my school.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jason,

I'd like to tell you about the "Network Class Plan" in my school.

This plan helps us a lot. Firstly, each enables us to communicate with each other. We can form several study groups, through which we are able to share some good learning materials. We can also post some of the difficulties that we meet in our studies on the school forum. It helps us to have a discussion about our studies. As a result, our grades improve. Last but not least, we can have some activities regularly to share our good learning experiences. We all appreciate this "Network Class Plan".

Do you have such a network class in your school? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱作文。提綱作文在寫作時(shí)需要注意以下幾個(gè)方面：首先需要審題。即：審要求、審文體、審人稱、審時(shí)態(tài)。其次，考生要能夠抓中心，列要點(diǎn)，列出寫作提綱。 寫作文時(shí)，一定要切題，抓住中心，緊扣要點(diǎn)。然后在體裁明確、中心突出、要點(diǎn)清晰的前提下，考生應(yīng)該選擇自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞語(yǔ)、句型，將要點(diǎn)逐條表達(dá)出來。最后根據(jù)要點(diǎn)選詞組句，然后按照篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連句成篇。在寫完全文后，還需要 通讀全文，檢查內(nèi)容是否符合要求，要點(diǎn)是否齊全，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否合乎要求。本篇文章中一定要注意三大要點(diǎn)缺一不可，還需要選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使文章更連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】第二段的第一句話總結(jié)這一段的主要內(nèi)容，為下文做好鋪墊。熟練地使用連接詞，如firstly、also、as a result、Last but not least。使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更清楚、緊湊。除此之外，還使用了定語(yǔ)從句這樣的高級(jí)句型，如through which we are able to share some good learning materials.以及We can also post some of the difficulties that we meet in our studies on the school forum.。