【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be full prepared. But the moment when I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank.

The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice, I will never give up when I do anything.

【答案】1. gives→gave

2.them→it

3.after→before

4.full→fully

5.去掉when

6.such→so

7.lose→losing

8.battlefield前加a

9.time→times

10.for→to

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了爸爸給我的最好的建議。小時(shí)候爸爸建議我去參加演講比賽，我盡了最大努力結(jié)果失敗了，在我為之痛苦的時(shí)候爸爸勸慰我說，人生就是戰(zhàn)場，要經(jīng)歷許多次失敗后才能獲得最后的勝利。聽了爸爸的建議后我從沒放棄過。

1. 考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：他總是給我一些建議，但我從來沒有認(rèn)真對待它。文章講述的是過去的事，從后半句中的謂語動(dòng)詞took可以看出，此句使用的是一般過去時(shí)。故將gives改為gave。

2. 考查代詞。此處指代不可數(shù)名詞advice。故將them改為it。

3. 考查連接詞。句意：所以我報(bào)名了，在比賽前，我盡了最大的努力做好充分的準(zhǔn)備。由后半句I did my best to be full prepared.可知，我做了很多準(zhǔn)備，按照邏輯關(guān)系可知，準(zhǔn)備應(yīng)是發(fā)生在比賽前。故將after改為before。

4. 考查副詞。應(yīng)該用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞prepared。故將full改為fully。

5. 考查連接詞。句意：但是我一站在臺上，我就緊張得大腦一片空白。the moment“一……就……”，可以引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句，相當(dāng)于when/while，表示主句和從句的動(dòng)作是同時(shí)進(jìn)行的。此處when多余。故去掉when。

6. 考查副詞。such和so都可以用來表示程度，意思是“如此；這樣”，但用法卻不相同。such是形容詞，用來修飾名詞；so是副詞，用來修飾形容詞或副詞。此處修飾形容詞nervous，應(yīng)用so。故將such改為so。

7. 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句意：輸?shù)舯荣惖慕?jīng)歷真的很痛苦。作介詞of的賓語用動(dòng)名詞。故將lose改為losing。

8. 考查冠詞。句意：生活就像一個(gè)戰(zhàn)場。此處泛指“一個(gè)戰(zhàn)場”，battlefield是以輔音音素開頭的詞，應(yīng)使用不定冠詞a。故battlefield前加a。

9. 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。句意：你需要輸?shù)艉芏啻尾拍苴A得最終的勝利。time表示次數(shù)時(shí)是可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)many判斷，此處用復(fù)數(shù)。故time改為times。

10. 考查固定短語。句意：由于他的建議，做任何事時(shí)我都不會放棄。thanks to意為“由于，幸虧”；thanks for意為“因……而感謝”，由后半句I will never give up when I do anything.可知，前半句和后半句之間是因果關(guān)系，因此應(yīng)使用thanks to。故將for改為to。

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