Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Lily在她的微博中說她為了減肥吃減肥藥，而且經(jīng)常不吃飯，導(dǎo)致身體變得很虛弱，狀態(tài)很不佳。請你在她的微博上用英文給她留言，內(nèi)容包括：

1.對她的現(xiàn)狀表示擔(dān)心；

2.指出吃減肥藥以及經(jīng)常不吃飯的壞處；

3.提出一些健康的減肥方法，如慢跑、定期到健身房健身等。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100個左右

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：減肥藥weight-loss pill；慢跑jogging；健身房gym

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lily

I’m sorry to learn that you are upset about being overweight recently.

I think you should stop taking weight-loss pills in no time because they are harmful to your health. Besides you need to eat a healthy diet to recover your strength. There are many other ways to lose weight. For example jogging is quite a popular form of exercise. You may do it in the morning or after supper. Another way is that you can go to the gym regularly which is also an effective way of losing weight and keeping healthy.

In a word if you insist on exercising you are sure to have an attractive figure and stay slim and healthy.

Yours’

Li Hua

【解析】根據(jù)題目得知你的英國筆友Lily在她的微博中說她為了減肥吃減肥藥，而且經(jīng)常不吃飯， 導(dǎo)致身體變得很虛弱，狀態(tài)很不佳。請你在她的微博上用英文給她留言，內(nèi)容包括：1.對她的現(xiàn)狀表示擔(dān)心； 2.指出吃減肥藥以及經(jīng)常不吃飯的壞處；3.提出一些健康的減肥方法， 如慢跑、定期到健身房健身等。同學(xué)們要能適當(dāng)把握三個部分的內(nèi)容，使文章內(nèi)容相協(xié)調(diào)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞Besides，In a word，使語義連貫，連接順暢。

【范文亮點】

范文有一些值得大家學(xué)習(xí)的地方，如：文章使用了很多優(yōu)秀的詞匯和短語：be upset about失望， in no time馬上 ，be harmful to 有害， insist on堅持，等等；文章也使用了多樣的句式，如定語從句Another way is that you can go to the gym regularly which is also an effective way of losing weight and keeping healthy.等等。