Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

進(jìn)入高考復(fù)習(xí)緊張階段，為幫助中學(xué)生健康成長(zhǎng)，學(xué)校英文報(bào)開(kāi)辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Mike，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說(shuō)了自己的困擾：近日由于壓力很大，經(jīng)常發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1．表示理解并給予安慰；

2．提出建議并說(shuō)明理由: 向朋友傾訴， 加強(qiáng)戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)， 保持積極心態(tài)等。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；

3．信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：lose one's temper 發(fā)脾氣

Hi, Worried,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.

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Yours,

Mike

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Worried:

I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger .And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

Yours，

Mike

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，要求按照Worried寫的求助信寫一封回信，根據(jù)信中提到的困擾表示理解和安慰，并提出建議并給出理由。所以考生在寫作的時(shí)候，要圍繞來(lái)信的問(wèn)題一一給與解答。但是光翻譯要點(diǎn)肯定不行，還要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，關(guān)鍵的是在寫作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。也要注意人稱，時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)和常見(jiàn)的語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題，同時(shí)在列舉建議和理由的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組：a good way of…的好方法， let out 釋放，get rid of消除， carry on 繼續(xù)進(jìn)行，句式上體現(xiàn)出多變的特點(diǎn)，如：I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句，The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. 這句話用了表語(yǔ)從句和時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句， The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. 這句話用了不定式做表語(yǔ)和so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句， talk to someone you trust about how you feel. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句。文章還使用了合適的連接詞First, Second, And third使文章很連貫。