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【題目】書面表達(dá)

生活中沖突時(shí)有發(fā)生。你班同學(xué)蘇華和李江在上周籃球賽打籃球時(shí)發(fā)生爭(zhēng)執(zhí),導(dǎo)致關(guān)系緊張。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合此事,并根據(jù)以下提示,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文,向?qū)W校英文報(bào)“Happy Teens”專欄投稿。

簡(jiǎn)要描述事情的經(jīng)過	打籃球、碰撞(bump into each other)、爭(zhēng)執(zhí),等等
分析發(fā)生沖突的原因	1.遇事不夠冷靜
	2.…太注重得失…
談?wù)劚苊鉀_突的做法	(請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷或感想,提出至少兩種做法)

注意:

1.對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2.詞數(shù)100左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3.作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息,如班級(jí)、人名等。

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon,Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.

To be honest,it was Su’s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking,pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.

We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely. To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語(yǔ)To be honest老實(shí)說；As a matter of fact事實(shí)上；Instead of 而不是；To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等。