Question

【題目】假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會(huì)，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時(shí)詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明：

李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡

航班號(hào)：CA985

到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇書信類作文，信中還需說明：李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡，航班號(hào)：CA985，到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30，需要注意：詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

亮點(diǎn)說明：本題是一篇書信類作文，作者寫出了文章所需要的信息，用了do one a favor表示需要幫一個(gè)忙。用了Would you please句式委婉的說出了自己的想法。時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)寫的都比較明確，My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.

詳細(xì)的描述叔叔的樣子，用了現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)表示狀態(tài)。時(shí)態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)換的比較好，是一篇較為不錯(cuò)的書信類作文。