Question

19．假設你叫李華，從互聯網上（the Internet）上得知一個國際中學組織將在新加坡（Singapore） 舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學生參加．請寫一封電子郵件申請參加．
內容主要包括：
1．自我介紹（包括英語能力）；
2．參加意圖（介紹中國、了解其他國家）；
3．希望獲準．
注意：
1．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數100左右；
3．郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好．
Dear Sir or Madam，
                ．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一）I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．
該句型that you have posted…引導一個定語從句，修飾先行詞the summer camp，that在句子里做post賓語．
（高分句型二）What is more，I'lI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well．
該句首先使用What is more來起到承上啟下的作用，在句子里tell sb sth和learn about為兩個并列句．
高級詞匯短語：announcement 通知；take part in 參加；I've been learning 現在完成進行時；be accepted as 被接受．

解答 作文
Dear Sir or Madam，
　　I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China．（高分句型一）I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it．I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I speak fluent English．（高分句型二）What is more，I'JI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well．I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp．
　　Looking forward to your reply!
　　                                                    Yours sincerely，
                                                        Li Hua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．