Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

An old man went to live with his son, daughter-in-law, and four-year-old grandson. The family ate together at the table, but his shaky hands and failing sight made eating difficult. Peas rolled off his spoon onto the floor. When he grasped the glass, milk spilled on the tablecloth. The son and daughter-in-law became angry with the mess. So they set a small table in the corner. There Grandfather ate alone while they enjoyed dinner.

Since Grandfather had broken a dish or two, his food was served in a wooden bowl. Still, the only words the couple had for him were sharp when he dropped a fork or spilled food. The grandson watched silently. One evening, the father noticed the son playing with wood scraps and asked the child sweetly, “What are you making?” The boy responded, “Oh, I am making a bowl for you and mum to eat your food in when I grow up.”

The words struck the parents so hard that they were speechless. Then tears started to stream down their cheeks. The son took gently Grandfather back to their table. From then on, he ate every meal with them. Neither of them seemed to care any longer when a fork was dropped, milk spilled, or the tablecloth soiled.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 以約30個詞概括故事的主要情節(jié)；

2. 以約120個詞就“關愛老人”這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括如下要點：

(1)結合你的實際生活，談談在關愛老人方面，你平時是怎樣做的。

(2)就老年人應該得到的待遇發(fā)表你的看法并闡明理由。

［寫作要求］

1. 作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

［評分標準］

概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

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Answer 1

A grandfather was treated badly by his son and daughter-in-law. And later the couple’s attitudes was changed after they saw their son was preparing a bowl for them. (33 words)

As for me, I always showed my respect and love to the old. When I was young, I brought my questions to them for help often, which made them busy but happy. I formed a habit to take a walk with them after dinner, talking about my study, ambitions and their rich experience.

In my opinion, we should treat the old people just like what we want to be treated when we are old. Honor and respect should be given to them by their relatives and the whole society, because they are in poor health, bad mental conditions, and can’t achieve everything by themselves. Besides, they’ve already contributed a lot to their family and society and they deserve the love from us all. (122 words )

【解析】

試題分析：閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。寫作內(nèi)容：1. 以約30個詞概括故事的主要情節(jié)；2. 以約120個詞就“關愛老人”這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括如下要點：(1)結合你的實際生活，談談在關愛老人方面，你平時是怎樣做的。(2)就老年人應該得到的待遇發(fā)表你的看法并闡明理由。要把所提示的點寫全，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，寫作時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。要求概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適篇章連貫。寫作要求：1. 作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。詞數(shù)要按要求，既不能太多也不能太少。

【亮點說明】A grandfather was treated badly by his son and daughter-in-law.文章第一句話就使用了一般過去時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)；the couple’s attitudes was changed after they saw their son was preparing a bowl for them.句中使用了含時間狀語從句的復合句；As for me, I always showed my respect and love to the old. As for的運用很巧妙；When I was young, I brought my questions to them for help often, which made them busy but happy.這是一個含時間狀語從句的復合句同時包含了一個which引導的非限制性定語從句；I formed a habit to take a walk with them after dinner, talking about my study, ambitions and their rich experience.現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語，運用的恰到好處；In my opinion, we should treat the old people just like what we want to be treated when we are old.句子雖然不太長但含有一個時間狀語從句和一個賓語從句；Honor and respect should be given to them by their relatives and the whole society, because they are in poor health, bad mental conditions, and can’t achieve everything by themselves.這是一個含原因狀語從句的復合句，主句中包含了情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)，從句中使用了并列謂語。

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