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3．2015年兩會前夕，原中央臺記者柴靜自費制作的關于環(huán)境污染的紀錄片《穹頂之下》引起強烈反響．假如你是李華，應用英語給21世紀英文報寫一封信，表達你的觀點．
內(nèi)容包括：1．闡述柴靜所做的事對我們生活的影響
          2．面臨環(huán)境污染我們能做些什么
注意：1．詞數(shù)100 左右
      2．開頭和 結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)
Dear editor，
After watching the movie Under the Dome，I was deeply moved by what ChaiJing did．____________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
         Best wishes!
                                                      Yours，
                                                       LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本文要求考生對紀錄片《穹頂之下》做出評論，題中已經(jīng)給出了要點內(nèi)容，考生首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，
 重要短語：
 be worthy of，值得；approve of 支持；For instance，例如；
高分句子：
1．I'm strongly convinced that an increasing number of Chinese have realized the great harm that pollution has done and will do what they can to improve our environment．本句為that引導的賓語從句，從句中又包含了what引導的主語從句，很見考生功底．
2．Only when we make every effort to reduce pollution can we feel ease under the dome，本句為重要句式，only位于從句句首時，主句要進行倒裝，意為只有…才…

解答 Dear editor，
      After watching the movie Under the Dome，I was deeply moved by what Chai Jing did．The movie has aroused the public's environmental awareness and is worthy of admiration（敘述影響）．
      Thanks to the movie，I'm strongly convinced that an increasing number of Chinese have realized the great harm that pollution has done and will do what they can to improve our environment（高分句型）．
      I approve of the view that everyone is supposed to take effective measures to protect our environment from being polluted．For instance，we can choose green transport like walking and bicycling．Obviously，the government should strengthen the management of pollutant emission．Only when we make every effort to reduce pollution can we feel ease under the dome（高分句型）．We do need the immediate change（給出建議）．
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．