Question

【題目】留意一下我們的周邊，可以發(fā)現(xiàn)陪讀現(xiàn)象已蔚然成風。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容應包括：

1．簡要描述陪讀現(xiàn)象；

2．分析父母陪讀的原因（2至3個）；

3．發(fā)表你對此的看法。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School?

In recent years, many parents choose to accompany their children in studying, which has aroused a wide concern.

These parents are willing to leave their hometown, even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus. Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children. Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids. Meanwhile, it can allow them to keep track of the kids’ academic performance.

Nevertheless, what they’ve ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent. Thus, they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future.

Trust leads to independence. So it seems to me that parents should create room for children’s growth and study in order to ensure their overall development.

【解析】

本文屬于半開放性作文，同時也是一篇正反觀點類的議論文。要求簡單描述陪讀現(xiàn)象，分析原因，可以從孩子的自理能力不足，學校的作息時間引起學生學習時間受限等角度著手。在描述原因時可以使用合適的連接詞來連接，讓他們成為一個整體。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，要注意使用諺語或者高級句型讓文章更有檔次

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