Question

【題目】假定你是紅星中學(xué)的學(xué)生會主席李華，高考臨近，你校決定舉辦高三畢業(yè)典禮(the Graduation Ceremony),請你代表學(xué)生會向全體高三學(xué)生發(fā)一則通知，內(nèi)容包括：

1.畢業(yè)典禮時間 (7月4日)及地點(報告廳lecture hall);

2. 參加者：

3. 活動;

4. 注意事項。

注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右：

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Notice

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The Student Union

Answer 1

【答案】Notice

We are going to have the Graduation Ceremony in the lecture hall on July 4 in order to welcome the coming college entrance examination and memorize the past three years. By then, some of us will read poems and some will tell stories. You can also hear wonderful singing and watch beautiful dancing there. We hope all the senior students can come and join in the activities. All the headmasters will be invited to our activities as representatives of teachers. Please get one performance ready because some of you will be asked to give us one.

The Student Union

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生一份關(guān)于舉辦高三學(xué)生畢業(yè)典禮的通知。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.畢業(yè)典禮時間 (7月4日)及地點(報告廳lecture hall);

2. 參加者：

3. 活動;

4. 注意事項。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

have the Graduation Ceremony；in the lecture hall；read poems；tell stories；hear wonderful singing；watch beautiful dancing；senior students；get one performance

第三步：連詞成句

1. We are going to have the Graduation Ceremony in the lecture hall on July 4.

2. Some of us will read poems and some will tell stories.

3. You can also hear wonderful singing and watch beautiful dancing there.

4. We hope all the senior students can come and join in the activities.

5. Please get one performance ready because some of you will be asked to give us one.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改