Question

假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)撰寫(xiě)一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．目前汽車(chē)帶來(lái)的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問(wèn)題；
2．騎自行車(chē)的益處，如：節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。
參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；節(jié)能（energy saving）
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右；
　　  2．演講稿開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles"．
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Good morning, everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles".
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles.
Come on and join us! Thank you!

解析試題分析：本文是一演講稿，騎自行車(chē)出行。內(nèi)容提示較詳細(xì)，考生容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的。考生在寫(xiě)作之前要認(rèn)真審題，演講稿要話語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)潔，語(yǔ)氣強(qiáng)烈有號(hào)召力。根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)作主要有三段內(nèi)容，第一段開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山點(diǎn)明演講主題；第二段主體內(nèi)容敘述汽車(chē)的害處，騎自行車(chē)的好處；第三段結(jié)束語(yǔ)，發(fā)起號(hào)召，大家都來(lái)騎自行車(chē)出行。另外，要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng)復(fù)數(shù)和第三人稱(chēng)。再有就是不能根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容逐字逐句的翻譯形成漢式的英語(yǔ)，應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章符合演講稿的寫(xiě)作要求，要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)思路明確，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練，層層深入。個(gè)別句子雖長(zhǎng)但易于理解。知識(shí)點(diǎn)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿唬�文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如a popular means of transport,; convenience，such as，traffic jams， environmentally friendly，is beneficial to， take the responsibility to等。As is known to all,定語(yǔ)從句；bringing great convenience to—非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。并注意了句子的銜接如：however，As far as I’m concerned，for one thing--- for another--，therefore等。
考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文——演講稿