【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友James由于不愛運動、吃垃圾食品上癮等原因陷入了肥胖的困擾中，非常苦惱，請你通過電子郵件給他提一些建議和意見，幫助他減肥。

注意:

1.詞數(shù):100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出但不計入總詞數(shù)）

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Dear James,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear James,

I have received your e-mail telling me that you are not interested in taking exercise and that you are addicted to eating junk food.Now you are worried about gaining weight. If you want to lose weight, what you should first do is find out why you are overweight

From your e-mail, it seems that there are two reasons: lack of exercise and an unbalanced diet. I have two suggestions. First, setaside time to exercise regularly. Only in this way can you keep slim. Second, eat more healthy food and stay away from junk food.There are stores that specialize in healthy food, which is a lile more expensive but can make a big difference.

I hope my suggestions are helpful. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件；你的美國朋友James由于不愛運動、吃垃圾食品上癮等原因陷入了肥胖的困擾中，非常苦惱，請你通過電子郵件給他提一些建議和意見，幫助他減肥。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第3步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如I have received your e-mail telling me that you are not interested in taking exercise and that you are addicted to eating junk food.；倒裝的運用Only in this way can you keep slim.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。

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