Question

假定你是李華，因陪母親看病，不能參加明天下午關(guān)于美國文化的講座。請你寫一封電子郵件向老師Miss Clinton 請假。

內(nèi)容主要包括：

不能聽講座， 向老師表示歉意；

向老師陳述缺席理由；

詢問老師是否有講座錄音或影像，以便日后補(bǔ)聽講座、

注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100 左右

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Miss Clinton，

I am very sorry that___________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Miss Clinton,

I am very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on American culture.

My mother is ill, and I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip. I will take care of my mother until she is better, so I have to ask for several days’ leave. I am very interested in the topic of American culture. It is nearly a pity that I miss it. I wonder if there will be any recording of the lecture. If so, I can listen to it when it is convenient.

Thank you very much.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是書信類作文，寫一封電子郵件向老師Miss Clinton 請假，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】所給范文語言簡潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子：take care of 照料，ask for several days’ leave請幾天假.I am very sorry that I will not be able to attend the lecture tomorrow afternoon, which is on American culture.這句話用了非限制性定語從句， It is nearly a pity that I miss it. 這句話用了it做形式主語和虛擬語氣， If so, I can listen to it when it is convenient. 這句話用了省略句。

考點(diǎn)：考查書信類寫作