分析 這是一篇提綱作文,讓我們就越來越多的同學(xué)使用手機(jī),甚至影響了學(xué)習(xí)這個(gè)現(xiàn)象,向某英語報(bào)社編輯寫一封信,提出自己的看法,這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維,將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來.寫作需要用第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:手機(jī)的用途;手機(jī)的負(fù)作用;你的看法.我們此篇作文分為兩部分,第一部分為提出問題.第二部分為手機(jī)的用途及負(fù)作用.第三部分為作者的看法.
重點(diǎn)短語與句型:
be popular among 受歡迎
keep in touch with 保持聯(lián)系
have fun玩的開心
pay attention to 注意
高分句型一:Using mobile phone,they can keep in touch with their friends and families wherever they are.此句用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語以及wherever引導(dǎo)地點(diǎn)狀語從句
高分句型二:However,there are some problems with using mobile phones,one of which is that the ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom.此句用了定語從句以及表語從句.
解答 Dear Editor,
I am a Senior One student.In our class,more and more students go to school with mobile phones.(提出問題)
Mobile phones are very popular among students.Using mobile phone,they can keep in touch with their friends and families wherever they are(高分句型一).Besides,the mobile phone is a way to have fun.However,there are some problems with using mobile phones,one of which is that the ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom(高分句型二).Some students spend too much time and money in sending messages,playing games or even cheating in exams.(手機(jī)的用途及負(fù)作用 )
Personlly,students should not use mobile phones in class,play games or cheat in exams.They should pay more attention to their lessons.Also because it is expensive,the owner should take good care of it.(作者的看法)
Yours
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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