Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的好友 Alexande邀請(qǐng)你本周六晚上去他家參加他的朋友聚會(huì)，但你有約在先可能要晚些到他家。請(qǐng)用英文給他寫封電子郵件，向他說明你遲到的原因并表達(dá)歉意。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

Dear Alexander，

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Yours truly

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Alexander,

I’m writing to say sorry to you because with an important appointment to attend, I may be a little late for your gathering this Saturday evening.

As arranged a week ago, this Saturday evening, the very time for your gathering, I, together with several of my friends, will visit my teacher who taught us English for three years in junior school. I will try my best to get to your gathering as early as possible, but I may still be a little late. I’d appreciate it if you could accept my sincerest apology.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封電子郵件給朋友道歉，是一篇道歉信。

第一步：應(yīng)用文表達(dá)，開頭結(jié)尾給出，注意格式規(guī)范，整篇文章使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，符合書信語(yǔ)境表達(dá)。

第二步：根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，給出寫信目的，并給出遲到原因，表達(dá)歉意，內(nèi)容包含要點(diǎn)概括全面，關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)，句子選用合理，如I’m writing to say sorry to you，with an important appointment to attend，the very time for your gathering…等等。

第三步：連詞成文，結(jié)構(gòu)銜接得體，字?jǐn)?shù)適當(dāng)，句子運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確。