Question

假設(shè)你是小明的好朋友李華，小明參加了一個(gè)英語演講比賽，他對比賽非常擔(dān)心，向你求助，請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫一封建議信。

賽前準(zhǔn)備	做好充分準(zhǔn)備：如平時(shí)可對著鏡子練習(xí)
	用語簡練, 使評委印象深刻
比賽時(shí)	保持微笑
	忘詞時(shí)不緊張，繼續(xù)演講

[寫作內(nèi)容]
1. 說明回信的意圖；
2. 向小明提出建議；
3. 預(yù)祝小明比賽成功。
鏡子：mirror    簡練：brief and concise
Dear Xiaoming，
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Wish you success in the speech!
Yours，
Li Hua
【寫作要求】
只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確；信息內(nèi)容完整；篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Answer 1

Dear Xiaoming,
You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. When you are giving the speech, remember to keep smile. Even if you forget your words，don’t be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it.
Wish you success in the speech!
Yours，
Li Hua

通過審題，首先決定縮要寫的要點(diǎn)：說明回信的意圖；向小明提出建議；預(yù)祝小明比賽成功（這點(diǎn)在結(jié)尾中已經(jīng)給出）。回信的意圖可以一句話交代，所以重點(diǎn)是寫建議，結(jié)合表格內(nèi)容，要合理的將材料進(jìn)行整合加工，也就是要寫賽前準(zhǔn)備和比賽后要做的事情。在表達(dá)要點(diǎn)時(shí)，切忌逐字逐句翻譯，也不能受漢語影響，要多用固定詞組，如：are very nervous about ，make some suggestions， get well prepared， leave a deep impression on。還有固定句型如so that句型，定語從句等，也要注意文章的連貫性，如In my opinion等。