Question

假設(shè)你叫李華，你的一個(gè)朋友John剛從美國(guó)歸來(lái)，邀請(qǐng)你參加本周日在他家舉辦的朋友聚會(huì)，但你不能參加，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件:
1. 表達(dá)想?yún)⒓拥囊庠?   
2. 忙于準(zhǔn)備高考;
3. 由于感冒,身體不適;
4. 表示歉意并另約時(shí)間。
注意：可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；詞數(shù)120左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

Answer 1

Dear John,
I’m extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday. It is very kind of you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to going to your party and sharing your happy experiences abroad. Much to my regret, I will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, for which I am now really busy preparing.
What’s worse, I have caught a bad cold lately and I’d rather I stayed at home instead of going anywhere.
Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Would it be convenient for you if we make it after the exam?
I’m truly sorry. I hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apologies. I look forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。請(qǐng)你以李華的名義給你的一位美國(guó)朋友John寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，說(shuō)明你不能參加本周日在他家舉辦的朋友聚會(huì)，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書(shū)信類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，不要逐字逐句翻譯，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】Much to my regret,這是固定詞組“使我遺憾的是”，look forward to盼望， It is very kind of you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to going to your party and sharing your happy experiences abroad. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，I will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, for which I am now quite busy preparing. 這句話用了同位語(yǔ)從句和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，I have caught a bad cold lately and I’d rather I stayed at home instead of going anywhere.這句話用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣， I hope you will forgive me and accept my sincere apologies.這句話用的是賓語(yǔ)從句，還有文章還用了What’s worse,這樣的詞組使文章更連貫。