Question

假設(shè)你是我校高一學(xué)生李華，從網(wǎng)絡(luò)新聞得知有人大肆捕殺東北虎，感到十分氣憤。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)（China Daily）報(bào)社編輯寫(xiě)一封信，就此事發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)并對(duì)保護(hù)東北虎提出你的建議。
注意：1. 詞數(shù):100-120詞左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3. 參考詞匯：東北虎Siberian tiger
Dear Editor,
I’ve just learnt the news online about _________________________________________
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                        
                                                                                             
                                                                              
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                        
                                                                                           
                                                                                      
                                                                                            
                                                                         
                                                                                   
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’ve just learnt the news online about killing Siberian tigers and I am so sorry.
I think Siberian tigers must be protected well, or they will die out. It’s time that we took action to protect them from being killed.
It’s said that the population of Siberian tigers is getting smaller and smaller. I think there are two main reasons for this. This first reason is that some people kill Siberian tigers for their skins and bones to earn money. The other reason is that too many trees have been cut down, which has destroyed the places where Siberian tigers used to live.
We should work together to make a pleasant home for both human beings and animals. I hope that the government should pass laws to protect Siberian tigers and punish the tiger hunters. Because protecting animals is protecting ourselves.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：這是一篇話(huà)題類(lèi)作文。假設(shè)你是我校高一學(xué)生李華，從網(wǎng)絡(luò)新聞得知有人大肆捕殺東北虎，感到十分氣憤。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)（China Daily）報(bào)社編輯寫(xiě)一封信，就此事發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)并對(duì)保護(hù)東北虎提出你的建議。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。注意一定要發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)并對(duì)保護(hù)東北虎提出自己的建議。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100-120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】This first reason is that some people kill Siberian tigers for their skins and bones to earn money.這里含有一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句；The other reason is that too many trees have been cut down, which has destroyed the places where Siberian tigers used to live. 這里含有一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句和一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。I hope that the government should pass laws to protect Siberian tigers and punish the tiger hunters. 這里含有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句。
考點(diǎn)：話(huà)題類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)