Question

近年來，隨著私家車的增加，城市交通越來越擁擠。在中、小學(xué)生上學(xué)或放學(xué)時(shí)，校門口以及學(xué)校附近擁擠問題更加嚴(yán)重。這給學(xué)生、教師、家長和其他市民帶來許多不便。尤其值得注意的是，學(xué)校附近的交通堵塞也存在不可忽略的隱患。為此，這引起了不少民眾的擔(dān)憂。你作為一名在校學(xué)生，署名張小明，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一封英語信，向本校英語報(bào)投稿。
1. 為什么要寫這封英語信。
2. 你們學(xué)校門口及附近交通擁擠的原因。
3. 提出二至三條建議。
注意：詞數(shù)120左右。
Dear Editor,
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Yours,
Zhang Xiaoming

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’m Zhang Xiaoming, a student from Grade 3. I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our school gate.
With so many parents coming to pick up their children, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, causing much inconvenience to us students as well as our teachers and passers-by. Many people have been worrying about the hidden traffic problems. So I strongly recommend some effective and urgent measures be taken. First, we should encourage students to ride their bicycles or walk to school by themselves instead of taking cars, which will not only help reduce the jam but benefit students’ health as well. It is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others. Besides, cars should not be allowed to park near the school gate.
I do hope my suggestions can be considered and the problem can be solved soon.
Yours,
Zhang Xiaoming

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【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如pick up，cause …  to do，as well as，worry about, take measures，encourage sb. to do，instead of， not only … but …；還運(yùn)用with引導(dǎo)的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，句型which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句。并注意了句子的銜接如：so，first，also，，besides 等等。
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