12.假如你是李華,幾天前你收到一封來自你朋友Linda的email.全文如下:
Dear Li Hua,
How are you these days?I'm already a senior high school student,as you know.I want to travel alone this summer.But my parents don't agree with me.Ijust can't understand them.I need your advice.
Yours,
Linda
請根據(jù)所給材料,給Linda寫封回信,要點包括她父母不同意的可能理由,并表明你對此的態(tài)度,提出合理的建議(至少2條).
注意:100個詞左右.信的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù).可適當增加細節(jié)和連貫詞,使得行文流暢.
Dear Linda.
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice.From your letter,I know that your parents don'tagree with your idea、that you want to travel alone.this summer.
       .
Yours truly,
Li Hua.

分析 這是一篇開放式作文,寫作時不僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯,而是要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來更充實,要組成一篇通順連貫的短文.需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點都需要包括,缺一不可.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關系,一定要契合給出的開頭,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題.
亮點句型一:From your letter,I know that your parents don't agree with your idea that you want to travel alone this summer.從你的來信中,我知道你父母不同意你今年夏天想獨自旅行的想法.本句中that your parents don't agree with your idea that you want to travel alone this summer是一個賓語從句,在這個賓語從句中,that you want to travel alone this summer是名詞idea的同位語從句.
亮點句型二:I guess the reason why they don't agree with you is that they are concerned for your safety.我想他們不同意你的原因是他們擔心你的安全.why they don't agree with you 是定語從句,修飾先行詞reason;that they are concerned for your safety是表語從句.

解答 Dear Linda,
   I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice.From your letter,I know that your parents don't agree with your idea that you want to travel alone this summer.(亮點句型一)
  I guess the reason why they don't agree with you is that they are concerned for your safety.(亮點句型二) Perhaps they may think you're too young to travel alone.Besides,they'd like you to make use of this summar holiday to improve your study.
  In my view,it's a good idea for teenabers to travel alone,for traveling not only helps us ease our mind but also make new friends and experience new culture.Here are my tips for your reference.First,it's important to have a talk with your parents and persuade them you are old enough to manage things properly.Second,if they agree,you'd better make a detailed plan for your travel in advance,including your destination and your means of transportation.If they still do not agree,you'd better show respect for them.
  Anyway,I wish you a pleasant summer holiday.
      Yours truly,
      LiHua

點評 考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題,并有部分的文字提示.給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大.對于考生的綜合能力要求較高,要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力.在完成開放性作文時,首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在你的能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時要賦予變化,因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭.同時也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體,在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候,可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性.

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