Question

假定你是張峰，一家英文報社邀請你調(diào)查一下中學(xué)生對網(wǎng)絡(luò)使用的情況，并依據(jù)調(diào)查寫一篇新聞報道。請根據(jù)下表提供的信息，對你的調(diào)查作簡要介紹，發(fā)給報社。
主要用途： 1、閱讀國內(nèi)外新聞， 學(xué)習(xí)英語。
2、發(fā)e-mail，欣賞音樂，看電影，玩游戲等
3、網(wǎng)上購物
出現(xiàn)的問題：1、過多的在網(wǎng)上玩游戲，浪費了時間，影響了學(xué)業(yè)
2、瀏覽不健康信息，對身心有害
注意：1、詞數(shù)：100左右  
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
3、文章開頭已給出
As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life._______
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Answer 1

As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily liffe. We often read news at home and abroad and learn foreign languages by ourselves on the Internet. Sometimes we send e-mails to our families as well as friends. Besides, we listen to music, enjoy films and play computer games on it. We can even do shopping without leaving our homes.
However, it has its disadvantages. Many students waste too much time playing computer games, which has a bad effect on their students. What’s worse, the bad information on the Internet does great harm to them. I hope every students can make use of the Internet properly for their students.

試題分析：本文是一篇說明文。文章給出了較詳細(xì)的漢語提示，要求考生根據(jù)提示寫出一篇完整的短文。成文時應(yīng)注意：1.文章內(nèi)容要齊全；主要用途： （1）閱讀國內(nèi)外新聞， 學(xué)習(xí)英語；（2）發(fā)e-mail，欣賞音樂，看電影，玩游戲等；（3）網(wǎng)上購物；出現(xiàn)的問題：（1）過多的在網(wǎng)上玩游戲，浪費了時間，影響了學(xué)業(yè)；（2）瀏覽不健康信息，對身心有害。2.人稱：第一人稱為主；3.時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；4.適當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯、短語和句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.使用一些連詞和插入語使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。
【亮點說明】使用了從句：1.定語從句Many students waste too much time playing computer games, which has a bad effect on their students.2.賓語從句I hope every students can make use of the Internet properly for their students.使用了連詞和插入語：Besides, However, What’s worse使用了短語：at home and abroad；have a bad effect on；do great harm to；make use of