Question

假如你是李華，現(xiàn)在高中二年級(jí)學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，以The Highlight of My Senior High School Life為題，用英語寫一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)要介紹你的高中生活。

師生關(guān)系	談?wù)剮熒�關(guān)系
課程學(xué)習(xí)	介紹你在校的學(xué)習(xí)情況
課外活動(dòng)	介紹你的課外活動(dòng)
自己的感受	……

說明：1.短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2.在內(nèi)容要求的基礎(chǔ)上可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使短文意思通順、連貫。
3.詞數(shù)120～150.
The Highlight of My Senior High School Life
I’m Li Hua. Now I’m studying in senior 2 and experiencing an unforgettable and tense life.
                                                                                      
                                                                               

Answer 1

The Highlight of My Senior High School Life
I’m Li Hua. Now I’m studying in senior 2 and experiencing an unforgettable and tense life. As a student of Senior 2. I’m working hard to realize my dream.
In the class, I listen attentively and sometimes I discuss problems with my classmates. In self-study courses, I do a lot of homework or papers. But we have colorful out-of-class activities to relax ourselves after a day’s hard working. I like table tennis and I’m on our school table tennis. Besides, I like swimming very much, which I think is great to my health.
I’m glad that the relationship between our teachers and us students is very good. We often discuss problems and play together. I’d like to say I have learned a lot from my teachers both in books and in life.
Although sometimes studying is tiring, I feel very happy and this experience will be kept in my mind forever.

解析試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用虛擬語氣，所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其注意虛擬語氣的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些常見短語realize my dream 實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢(mèng)想；relax ourselves放松自己； learned a lot from 從當(dāng)中學(xué)會(huì)。。；kept in my mind把。。記在心里。 Besides, I like swimming very much, which I think is great to my health.這個(gè)句子運(yùn)用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。I’d like to say I have learned a lot from my teachers both in books and in life這個(gè)句子中l(wèi)earn后面跟著一個(gè)賓語從句，不缺成分，由that來引導(dǎo)可省略。Although sometimes studying is tiring, I feel very happy and this experience will be kept in my mind forever這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句。
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