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3．昨天上午，你校組織了一場"向榜樣學(xué)習(xí)"的勵志宣講會．宣講會上，來自各個年級的學(xué)霸們都講述了自己的學(xué)習(xí)心得并分享了具體的學(xué)習(xí)方法．作為一名高三學(xué)生，你聽完宣講會后感觸頗深．請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇參會感想．
寫作要點：
1．簡單總結(jié)并評價這次宣講會；
2．你從宣講會中學(xué)到了什么．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．宣講會：an inspirational meeting
Yesterday morning，an inspirational meeting was held in our school．Many top students in our school shared their study experience and unique learning methods，which are beneficial to those who are confused about their studies．In my opinion，the meeting was a big success，and what it provided for us was quite valuable．
As for me，I have learnt a lot from the meeting．First，I have realized a positive attitude plays an important role in our studies．No matterwhat problems we may meet，we should always try our best to find solution with strong determination．Then，I have known many useful learning methods and will apply them to my study．Lastly，I have become more confident about myself I strongly believe I can improve my ability through hard work．．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Many top students in our school shared their study experience and unique learning methods，which are beneficial to those who are confused about their studies．
該句型使用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，which在句子里做主語；
（高分句型二）No matterwhat problems we may meet，we should always try our best to find solution with strong determination
該句使用了no matter what引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句；
在列舉時使用了一些過渡詞，如：First，、Then、Lastly等
高級詞匯：unique 獨特的；the meeting was a big success這次會議是一次成功的會議；strong determination堅強的決心；apply them to 應(yīng)用于…

解答 Yesterday morning，an inspirational meeting was held in our school．（高分句型一）Many top students in our school shared their study experience and unique learning methods，which are beneficial to those who are confused about their studies．In my opinion，the meeting was a big success，and what it provided for us was quite valuable．（總結(jié)評價）
    （我所學(xué)到的東西）As for me，I have learnt a lot from the meeting．First，I have realized a  positive attitude plays an important role in our studies．（高分句型二）No matterwhat problems we may meet，we should always try our best to find solution with strong determination．Then，I have known many useful learning methods and will apply them to my study．Lastly，I have become more confident about myself I strongly believe I can improve my ability through hard work．

點評 寫好這類提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點完整地表述出來，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點，發(fā)揮想象，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等．