Question

13．國務院近來頒布了關于公共場所嚴禁吸煙的規(guī)定．假設你是新華中學的學生李華，請你就現(xiàn)在很多青少年吸煙的現(xiàn)象寫一篇文章．內容包括以下要點：
1．現(xiàn)象：很多青少年吸煙；
2．分析原因；
3．你的觀點．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100-120；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一篇關于青少年吸煙的作文，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內容要點包括：很多青少年吸煙現(xiàn)象；分析原因；你的觀點．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為青少年吸煙現(xiàn)象．第二部分為分析原因．第三部分為作者的觀點．
重點短語與句型：
 on the rise 增長
in all walks  各行各業(yè)
account for 解釋，說明…的原因
be  harmful to 對…有害
make progress 取得進步
高分句型一：It is reported that the number of teenage smokers has been on the rise in recent years，which has caused great concern among people in ail walks or life．此句用了It is V-ed that…"據(jù)說"句型和which引導的非限制性定語從句．
高分句型二：They can buy what they want，including cigarettes此句用了what 引導的賓語從句．

解答 It is reported that the number of teenage smokers has been on the rise in recent years，which has caused great concern among people in all walks or life．（高分句型一）（青少年吸煙現(xiàn)象）
     There are several reasons that account for this fact．First of all，it is easy for teenagers to get cigarettes．Cigarettes are available almost everywhere．Today's teens have more spare money，which comes from the improved living standard of their parents．They can buy what they want，including cigarettes．（高分句型二）Second，the teen years are the time when young people want to be more independent from their parents and form their own values．The enormous mental pressures of these years can make some people turn to smoking．（分析原因）
    Smoking is very harmful to our health．It does great harm not only to our health，but also to our mind，especially for us teenagers．I think we middle school students are the future builders of our country．We should study hard and make progress every day．We should form good habits so that we can spend our time learning things useful and valuable for our motherland and people．（作者的觀點）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．