Question

12．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Rose wanted a job．She went to many offices and she didn't like any of them．One day she saw a board in an office read："This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute．"Rose was exciting．She then went to the manager's office．Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head．"Do you need a typist？"asked Rose．"Yes!"he said．Rose clapped（拍） her hand and asked，"OK!How much will you pay for me every month？"The manager thought for a while and said，"I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months．Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month．"Rose smiled and answer，"Great!I will come and work here three months late．"The manager was speechless．

Answer 1

分析 Rose想找工作，去了很多家公司都不滿意．一天她看到了一家公司招打字員，就去應(yīng)聘了．結(jié)果很滿意．

解答 Rose wanted a job．She went to many offices and she didn't like any of them．One day she saw a board in an office read："This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute．"Rose was exciting．She then went to the manager's office．Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head．"Do you need a typist？"asked Rose．"Yes!"he said．Rose clapped（拍） her handand asked，"OK!How much will you pay for me every month？"The manager thought for a while and said，"I will pay you 77 dollars for∧first three months．Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month．"Rose smiled and answer，"Great!I will come and work here three months late．"The manager was speechless．
詳解：
1．a(chǎn)nd改為but；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折．
2．read改為reading；句中read作board的后置定語(yǔ)，表示上面寫著，要用現(xiàn)在分詞．
3．whom改為who；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句中can type 200 words a minute修飾名詞typist，是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句；從句缺少主語(yǔ)，且句意指的是人，要用who來(lái)引導(dǎo)．
4．exciting改為excited；分詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是人的感受，要用過(guò)去分詞構(gòu)成的形容詞．
5．her改為his；邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤．句意指代的是男性．
6．hand改為hands；名詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是復(fù)數(shù)．
7．for去掉；動(dòng)詞搭配錯(cuò)誤．pay sb for sth為某物支付某人費(fèi)用．
8．加the；冠詞錯(cuò)誤．句中first是序數(shù)詞，要用定冠詞來(lái)限定．
9．a(chǎn)nswer改為answered；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．文章講述的是過(guò)去的事情，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
10．late改為later；副詞錯(cuò)誤．later多久以后．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．