16．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（/\），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I've learnt from the notice that you're looking for an English editor for us school paper．I'm written this letter to apply the position．
I'm Li Hua，a Senior Three student in our school．In my view，I met your requirements：for one thing，I'm willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others； for another，I'm good at both English or Fine Arts．I'm either skilled in using computers．I would be glad if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview．
I'm looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient．

分析 本文介紹了校報(bào)社招聘編輯，我自薦，并列舉了我符合要求的幾個(gè)方面．

解答 I've learnt from the notice that you're looking for an English editor for us school paper．I'm written this letter to apply∧the position．
I'm Li Hua，a Senior Three student in our school．In my view，I met your requirements：for one thing，I'm willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others； for another，I'm good at both English or Fine Arts．I'm either skilled in using computers．I would be glad if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview．
I'm looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient．
詳解：
1．us改為our 考查物主代詞．根據(jù)全文可知是我們學(xué)校報(bào)社尋找編輯的．
2．writte改為writing 考查時(shí)態(tài)．此處表示我現(xiàn)在寫(xiě)信目的是…所以用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)．
3．在apply后加for 考查介詞．考查固定短語(yǔ)apply for 意為申請(qǐng)．
4．met改為meet 考查時(shí)態(tài)．全文描述的是現(xiàn)在一種情況，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
5．serve改為serving 動(dòng)名詞．devote…to…意為把…奉獻(xiàn)給…to是介詞，所以需用動(dòng)名詞結(jié)構(gòu)．
6．or改為and 考查連接詞．english和arts兩門(mén)科目并列，所以用and．
7．either改為also 考查副詞．前面提到我擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)和藝術(shù)，我還擅長(zhǎng)電腦，所以這里用also表示也，還．
8．去掉to 句子里offer為動(dòng)詞提供，offer sb sth給某人提供某物．
9．kindly改為kind 考查形容詞．修飾名詞reply 得用形容詞．
10．convenient改為convenience 考查名詞．固定短語(yǔ)at one's convenience 意為在某人方便時(shí)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)主要考查學(xué)生對(duì)基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)的掌握情況，涉及到的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)較多，零散，考生在平時(shí)要多積累．

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