1.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處,錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
     2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分.
I'm Tim,the exchange student from China.I had been studying in your school for a year.I am deep moved by the kindness of people around.What I want to say first is that the teachers here are very friendly.They do what they can help me and encourage me to study hard.Whenever I ask for questions,they give satisfactory answers.However,my classmates offer me a lot of help,too.We get on well with each other and I have made quite a few good friend.At home,Walter's parents take good care of me,treating me as if I am their own child.
I'm so grateful for all these people,with whom help I have been used to American culture and gained a lot of knowledge.

分析 本文以第一人稱講述了中國交換生Tim在美國學(xué)習(xí)的一年生活,在這一年里有很多人幫助了他,他也交到了很多朋友.他對這些人非常感激,他們幫助他學(xué)習(xí)美國文化,從中,他學(xué)到了不少知識.

解答 I'm Tim, the exchange student from China.I had been studying in your school for a year.I am deep moved 
                 an                                              have                                                                    deeply
by the kindness of people around.What I want to say first is that the teachers here are very friendly.They do what they can∧help me and encourage me to study hard.
                       to
Whenever I ask forquestions,they give satisfactory answers. However, my classmates offer me a 
                                                                             Besides/Moreover/Furthermore
lot of help,too.We get on well with each other and I have made quite a few good friend.At home,Walte
                                                                                                                         friends
r's parents take good care of me,treating me as if I am their own child.
                                                                          were
 I'm so grateful for all these people,with whom help I have been accustomed to American 
                        to                                 whose
culture and gained a lot of knowledge.
解析:
1.the-an.考查冠詞.因為the exchange student from China做Tim的同位語,表示一個來自中國的交換生,所以用不定冠詞,又exchange元音開頭,所以用an.
2.had-have.考查時態(tài).因為該句的時間狀語是for a year,所以謂語用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài),have done.
3.deep-deeply.考查形容詞和副詞.修飾動詞moved用副詞.
4.can后加to.考查句式.該句結(jié)構(gòu)是They(主語) do(謂語) what they can(賓語) help me (目的狀語)and encourage me to study hard(并列目的狀語),所以help前加to.注意句子中的can后省略了do.
5.去掉for.考查介詞. ask sth表示問某事;  ask for sth表示請求某物,本句表示問問題,所以用ask sth.
6.However-Besides/Moreover/Furthermore.考查連詞.However表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系;Besides/Moreover/Furthermore表示遞進關(guān)系.因為Whenever I ask for questions,they give satisfactory answers.和my classmates offer me a lot of help,too.之間是遞進關(guān)系,所以用后者.
7.friend-friends.考查名詞.quite a few 表示"許多",修飾名詞復(fù)數(shù).
8.a(chǎn)m-were.考查虛擬語氣.本句的as if表示好像我是他們自己的孩子,用虛擬語氣,跟現(xiàn)在的事實相反,所以用過去時,were(虛擬語氣里沒有was).
9.for-to.考查介詞.表示因某事感謝某人用be grateful to sb for sth.a(chǎn)ll these people指人,所以用to.
10.whom-whose.考查關(guān)系詞.句子I'm so grateful for all these people,with whom help I have been used to American culture and gained a lot of knowledge.里,定語從句with 和 help 之間確實定語,表示在他們的幫助下,所以用whose,而whom做賓語.

點評 考查短文改錯.
高考英語改錯題的常見錯誤類型1、謂語動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)
2、句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句子完整性
3、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)及主謂一致問題
4、上下文語意和代詞
5、介詞  固定搭配
6、固定(習(xí)慣)用法
7、形容詞和副詞是否誤用及其比較等級是否正確;
8、冠詞.取舍與選擇是否正確
9、連詞和從句引導(dǎo)詞
10、非謂語動詞的形式是否正確

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