假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起）不記分。

Dear Brown,

Last summer I take a part-time job in the International Camp for children．I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it．How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river．It is such beautiful a place! We can hear birds singing happy all around．Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very exciting．We usually work only five hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have fun. I am sure it will be a unforgettable experience．If you have interests in it, write to me soon．

Yours, Mary

 

1.take →took

2.have后面加been

3.in this→去掉in

4.join→joining

5.closed改成close

6.such→ so

7.happy→happily

8.that→which

9.a→an

10.interests→interest

【解析】

試題分析：本文介紹了夏令營活動的時間地點(diǎn)及其活動中的住所，信中邀請對方去參加這次夏令營，并指出了參加夏令營很有趣，可能會是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。

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