Question

6．南非世界杯將于2010年6月舉行．組委會定于5月底在旅游城市威海舉行宣傳活動，邀請各國朋友到南非看球賽．現(xiàn)招聘義務(wù)宣傳員．假如你叫李華，有意應(yīng)聘，請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給組委會寫一封信：
1．你英語口語好，在山東省英語口語比賽中獲一等獎，能承擔(dān)翻譯工作；
2．喜歡體育運(yùn)動；
3．組織主題班會活動，邀請其他同學(xué)參加．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120-150；
     2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們以李華的身份給組委會寫一封信，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：英語口語好，在山東省英語口語比賽中獲一等獎，能承擔(dān)翻譯工作；喜歡體育運(yùn)動；
組織主題班會活動，邀請其他同學(xué)參加．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為自我特長介紹．第二部分為期待答復(fù)．
重點(diǎn)短語與句型：
have the honour of有…榮幸
the organizing committee 組委會
be  proud of 以…為自豪
undertake the great obligation承擔(dān)重?fù)?dān)
go all out to do 盡一切努力做某事
高分句型一：It is universally acknowledged that the 2010 World Cup in South Africa is going to be held on June．此句用了it is V-ed that句型，人們普遍知曉…
高分句型二：I am LiHua，who is，from childhood，interested in football此句非限制性定語從句

解答 Dear leader，
It is universally acknowledged that the 2010 World Cup in South Africa is going to be held on June．（高分句型一）I have the honour of hearing the information that the organizing committee want to advertise for a compulsory propagandist．I am LiHua，who is，from childhood，interested in football．（高分句型二）I have done well in spoken English all the time and have the outstanding ability of translation．I am proud of telling you that I has an edge，thanks to his talent，over the other competitors in Shandong Spoken English Contest．I want to give myself a chance to undertake the great obligation so that I made myself worthy to the great enthusiasm of football．I have a presumptuous request that I wonder if you can allow me encourage my classmates to join in the activity through convening the class meeting．I believe my ability and please you believe my ability．I go all out to do it if you give a chance．（自我特長介紹）
I am looking looking forward to your reply．（期待答復(fù)）
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
 第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．