Question

【題目】假如你是李華，欲與本校另外四名同學組建一支樂隊，但缺乏經驗，請就以下情況或問題給知名音樂人卡曾斯（Cousins）先生發(fā)一封電子郵件以尋求幫助。

1 成員中有三名男生和兩名女生，均喜歡流行音樂與現代舞蹈。

2 每周只在周末排練，時間是否足夠？初期演奏宜多元化還是一種風格？

3 怎樣獲得較多的表演機會？

4 希望他能為樂隊起個名字。

Dear Mr. Cousins,

Yours sincerely,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Cousins,

Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for some advice on how to form a band. I, together with two boys and two girls in different classes in our school, want to form a band. We are all fond of pop music and modern dance. I’d like to know whether we should play one kind of music or different styles to start with. And is it enough to practice only at weekends? How can we get more chances to perform? We’d appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band.

Looking forward to your reply

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你是李華，欲與本校另外四名同學組建一支樂隊，但缺乏經驗，請就以下情況或問題給知名音樂人卡曾斯（Cousins）先生發(fā)一封電子郵件以尋求幫助。1.成員中有三名男生和兩名女生，均喜歡流行音樂與現代舞蹈。2. 每周只在周末排練，時間是否足夠？初期演奏宜多元化還是一種風格？3. 怎樣獲得較多的表演機會？4. 希望他能為樂隊起個名字。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫.寫作時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。避免全部使用簡單句。

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