Question

假定你是李華，于2014年4月1日搭乘國(guó)外某航空公司航班(Flight BA793)回國(guó)后，發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了一個(gè)行李箱（suitcase）現(xiàn)請(qǐng)用英文給該航空公司寫(xiě)一封信，請(qǐng)他們幫你尋找。
信件要點(diǎn)包括：
1.陳述寫(xiě)信原因;     2.簡(jiǎn)要描述該行李;   3.說(shuō)明其重要性；4.期待回復(fù)并表示感謝
注意：1.信件格式已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.詞數(shù)120左右
Dear Sir or Madam， 
                                                                                             
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
                                                                                            
Best wishes,
Yours truly,
LiHua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I took the flight BA793 on April 1, 2014. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suitcase. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.
My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a label on the handle with my name and address on it. It is really important for me, because I had put all important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on. Besides, it is my father who sent it to me on my birthday.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

解析試題分析:寫(xiě)好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，確定文章的主題、文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文分三段寫(xiě)出了寫(xiě)信的原因，第一段，寫(xiě)信的原因。第二段描述行李和它的重要性；最后表示感謝。內(nèi)容完整，層次清楚。并注意了句子開(kāi)頭的變化和銜接。同時(shí)文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如look forward to、Thanks for和when、because等引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句。
考點(diǎn):提綱類(lèi)作文。