假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

As a senior three student, it won’t take long after I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow student.

Firstly, I’d like to show my appreciation to those stand by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life will be different. Secondly, it’s high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstand. I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Thirdly, I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study, so hard work is the key to a success. Finally I want to express my hope which all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man.

1.after-before

2.student-students

3.who∧stand或stand-standing

4.will-would

5.I-me

6.misunderstand-misunderstood

7.firm-firmly

8.so-as / for/ because

9.去掉success前的a

10.which-that

【解析】

試題分析：題目主要考查學生對冠詞、名詞、副詞、時態(tài)、時間狀語從句、定語從句、同位語從句、固定句型、虛擬語氣等知識的掌握情況。其中的定語從句、同位語從句和虛擬語氣是重點語法，需要熟練掌握。

1.題1】考查時間狀語從句。句意：作為一名高三學生，再過不久就要畢業(yè)了。這里指距離畢業(yè)還有很短的時間，故把after改為before。

2.考查名詞復數(shù)。作者要和同學們分享很多東西，student是可數(shù)名詞，故把student改為students。

3.考查定語從句。先行詞是those，定語從句缺少主語，且指人，用who引導定語從句；也可用現(xiàn)在分詞standing作后置定語，故在stand前加who或把stand改為standing。

4.考查虛擬語氣。without沒有，引導含蓄條件句，相當于if they didn’t help me，對現(xiàn)在進行虛擬，主句用would+動詞原形，故把will改為would。

5.5】考查固定句型。It is high/about time for sb to do sth某人早該做某事了，for后跟代詞的賓格形式，故把I改為me。

6.6】考查時態(tài)。這里指作者曾經(jīng)傷害過或誤會過的同學，應該用一般過去時，故把misunderstand改為misunderstood。

7.7】考查副詞。修飾動詞或整個句子用副詞，firmly堅定地，這里修飾動詞believe，故把firm改為firmly。

8.8】考查連詞。句意：我已經(jīng)下定決心努力學習，因為刻苦努力是成功的關鍵，前后是因果關系，故把so改為as / for/ because。

9.9】考查冠詞和名詞。success意為“成功”時，是不可數(shù)名詞；意為“成功的人或事”時，是可數(shù)名詞，這里是“成功”的意思，故去掉success前的a。

10.10】考查同位語從句。從句“all the younger fellows can make full use of time”不缺少成分，因此不是定語從句；名詞hope后跟that引導的同位語從句，對hope進行補充說明，故把which改為that。

考點：考查冠詞；名詞；副詞；時態(tài)；時間狀語從句；定語從句；同位語從句；固定句型；虛擬語氣

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