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假定你是李明，你看到周圍很多同學(xué)都是近視眼，請根據(jù)下面所給出的要點提示，給我校英語報寫一篇短文。 要點提示： 1．導(dǎo)致近視的原因：長時間看書、看電視和玩電腦游戲等；一些不良的習(xí)慣如走路看書、躺著看書等。 2．如何保護(hù)視力：堅持做眼保健操；培養(yǎng)良好的讀書習(xí)慣等。 注意： 1．詞數(shù)100左右。 2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：近視的 short-sighted; 堅持 stick to

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Look around! Many of us become shortsighted, which without doubt has put us into great difficulty and has bad effects on our studies. It isn’t hard to find the reasons. First, we often spend too much time reading books, watching TV or playing computer games, making our eyes too tired. Second, there are some bad reading habits that make us have poor eyesight. For example, most of us like to read books while walking or lying on the bed. Here are some useful suggestions that we can try. First, stick to doing eye exercise. Second , try to form good reading habits. After reading for a long time, do have a rest by looking at distant things.And when we read ,we should keep the book 30 to 50 cm away from our eyes.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇實用文寫作，給我校英語報寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1．描述學(xué)生的近視問題；2．分析近視原因（長時間看書、看電視和玩電腦游戲等；一些不良的習(xí)慣如走路看書、躺著看書等）； 3．如何預(yù)防。在寫作時根據(jù)情況使用一般現(xiàn)在時。采用三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，分別介紹三個要點。同時使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞和過渡句，以使文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容連貫。為了增加文章亮點，還要盡量使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，比如定語從句，狀語從句，非謂語短語等。

【亮點說明】本篇范文作者首先指出問題。隨后作者用 It isn’t hard to find the reasons.引出近視的理由，最后 用Here are some useful suggestions that 提出建議。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，層次分明。在句式結(jié)構(gòu)方面作者使用了狀語從句Many of us become shortsighted, which without doubt has put us into great difficulty and has bad effects on our studies.定語從句here are some bad reading habits that make us have poor eyesigh和賓語從句I will do what I can to help you。此外文中還使用了First, Second , For example,等表達(dá)使文章渾然一體。

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