Question

【題目】假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，和表妹王芳即將參加2015年高考。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的情況，用英語給表妹寫一封建議信，建議她利用好高考前50天，考出好成績。內(nèi)容包括：

● 認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)

● 調(diào)適心態(tài)

● 適度鍛煉

● 其他方面

注意：

(1)詞數(shù)不少于80；

(2)請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答；

(3)開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

Dear Wang Fang,

How are you lately?________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Fang,

How are you recently?

I am writing to give you some suggestions on study and life. For Senior 3 students, time is precious. It is high time we took effective measures to live our life to the fullest.

First of all, I highly propose we make the most of the time in class, following our teachers. Besides, we tend to get anxious with time going by. Take it easy. More importantly, just as an old saying goes, Health is wealth. That is why we have to spend some time exercising regularly. Tired as we are, we are lucky and happy with so many teachers, friends, and our parents standing behind us. We may refer to them for timely help whenever we need it.

Do you like my advice? I do hope we will succeed in the entrance examination and be admitted to our ideal universities. Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循特定的文體格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤，語法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長句�？荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。要注意用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如around the corner ，communicate with ，am determined to, am grateful to, pay special attention to,還運(yùn)用了if，where引導(dǎo)的狀語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：To begin with，In this way，Besides, What’s more等等。