Question

2．2月26日，學(xué)校在大禮堂為高三學(xué)生舉行誓師大會(huì)，以鼓勵(lì)高三同學(xué)繼續(xù)拼搏，取得理想的成績(jī)．請(qǐng)寫一篇短文張貼在你校墻報(bào)的英語(yǔ)專欄．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．聽取專家報(bào)告；
2．師生代表發(fā)言；
3．你的感受．
要求：
1．不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章連貫；
2．字?jǐn)?shù)在120-150之間
提示：誓師大會(huì)oath-taking rally．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We paid attention to the expert's reports，which helps and improves our study and life．
我們認(rèn)真的聽了專家所作的報(bào)告，那報(bào)告對(duì)我們很有幫助能夠提高我們的學(xué)習(xí)和生活．
高分句型二：
For the coming days，we will seize the time and spare no efforts to study in order to achieve high scores in the exam to return our parents and teachers．
在以后的日子里，為了能夠在高考中取得好成績(jī)來回報(bào)父母和老師，我們將會(huì)抓住機(jī)會(huì)努力的學(xué)習(xí)．
句型一 which helps and improves our study and life 該句是一個(gè)由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which在從句中充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)，替代前面的先行詞report
句型二 we will seize the time and spare no efforts to study in order to achieve high scores…該句的謂語(yǔ)部分使用了一個(gè)重要的短語(yǔ)：①spare no efforts to do sth 盡最大努力做某事 
                                     ②in order to achieve high scores 此處為不定式謂語(yǔ)位于句尾作目的狀語(yǔ)．

解答 It's February 26th，we've hold a swearing in ceremony in school's great hall for the senior students in our high school．The cerenony's purpose is to encourage us work hard and strike for the last exams．We paid attention to the expert's reports，which helps and improves our study and life．（高分句型一）Two representatives of teachers delivered their speeches to inspire our confidence．For the coming days，we will seize the time and spare no efforts to study in order to achieve high scores in the exam to return our parents and teachers．（高分句型二）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，考生在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)將所提要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合在一起，運(yùn)用合適的詞匯和短語(yǔ)、準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)潔明了的語(yǔ)言將作文表達(dá)清楚．