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7．聯(lián)合國(guó)教科文組織就如何處理垃圾污染問(wèn)題向全世界中學(xué)生征文．請(qǐng)以"Saving Our City"為題，寫一篇100詞左右的短文．
提示：l．城市垃圾的危害：污染環(huán)境，對(duì)健康有害．
2．你所在的城市是如何處理垃圾的：
（1）垃圾分類；報(bào)紙、玻璃的再利用．
（2）填埋有害垃圾；處理廢水、廢氣．
3．如何盡我所能，愛(ài)護(hù)環(huán)境、保護(hù)環(huán)境．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)以"Saving Our City"為題寫一篇征文，寫作要點(diǎn)：l．城市垃圾的危害：污染環(huán)境，對(duì)健康有害．2．你所在的城市是如何處理垃圾的：（1）垃圾分類；報(bào)紙、玻璃的再利用．（2）填埋有害垃圾；處理廢水、廢氣．3．如何盡我所能，愛(ài)護(hù)環(huán)境、保護(hù)環(huán)境．屬提綱作文．在寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：deal with （處理）；otherwise（否則）； pay attention to （注意）；For example（例如）；do one's best to do （盡某人最大的努力去做）；fight against （與…作斗爭(zhēng)）．
高分句型：1．If people breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water，they may get ill．
                  if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，
                 2．The rest，which is believed to be harmful，is sent to a certain place and buried．
                  which引導(dǎo)一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為The rest，主句The rest is sent to a certain place and buried運(yùn)用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)．
                 3．Laws have been passed ①to protect the environment，②so waste water should be and is treated before it is poured into rivers．
                  本句運(yùn)用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，①不定式短語(yǔ)to protect the environment表示目的，②so引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities．Rubbish must be treated properly，otherwise it may cause problems．It may pollute the air and water．If people breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water，they may get ill（高分句型一）．
Our city has begun to pay attention to the problem．For example，rubbish is sorted．Some rubbish，such as newspapers and glass，is recycled．The rest，which is believed to be harmful，is sent to a certain place and buried（高分句型二）．Laws have been passed to protect the environment，so waste water should be and is treated before it is poured into rivers（高分句型三）．
We've been trying，but there is still a long way to go．We should do our best to fight against pollution．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否覆蓋了所給要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，使得上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，使文章淺顯易懂，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．