Question

假定你是米易中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華，到校學(xué)習(xí)已經(jīng)半學(xué)期了�，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和要求給你的父母寫(xiě)一封英文信，告知你的所見(jiàn)所聞、所感所悟。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．學(xué)校簡(jiǎn)介：位于攀枝花南部；環(huán)境舒適
2．師資團(tuán)隊(duì)：教師耐心、嚴(yán)格；受學(xué)生歡迎
3．學(xué)科發(fā)展：想學(xué)理科/文科；并給出原因（自擬兩條）文科 Liberal arts理科  Science
4．詢問(wèn)父母近況
要求：
1．短文詞數(shù)不少于100（不含已寫(xiě)好的部分）。2．內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫。
3．書(shū)寫(xiě)須清晰、工整。4．信件中不能出現(xiàn)本人真實(shí)信息。
Dear dad and mom,
It’s almost three months since I left you. How I miss you!
Now,                                                                         

Answer 1

Dear dad and mom,
It’s almost three months since I left you. How I miss you! Now, I want to tell you what I have seen and how I'm feeling at Miyi Senior High.
Miyi Senior High , which lies in the south of PanZhiHua City. Its environment is pretty quiet and beautiful, and first-class facilities afford us a good chance to work hard. I'm very satisfied with the teachers as well. As far as I know, not only are they patient with the students, but also strict in studies. They are well received by(are popular with) the students.
As for my studies, I'd like to choose science subjects. On one hand, I'm interested in science and have made great progress. On the other hand, science subjects challenge my potentials and I will have a promising future.
How is everything with you these days? I hope that you are not too tired and do care about yourself.
I’m looking forward to receiving your early reply.

解析試題分析：考查提綱式作文：這篇作文的提綱很詳細(xì)，關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)明確，思路清晰。把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)都涵蓋了。同時(shí)注意應(yīng)用較高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如be satisfied with 對(duì)…滿意，be well received by(are popular with)受…歡迎，As for 至于，make great progress做出很大的進(jìn)步，care about關(guān)心，It’s almost three months since I left you. 這句話用了固定句型，Now, I want to tell you what I have seen and how I'm feeling at Miyi Senior High.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， Miyi Senior High , which lies in the south of PanZhiHua City. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， As far as I know, not only are they patient with the students, but also strict in studies. 這句話用了倒裝句，還有范文使用了 On one hand, On the other hand,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)