觀察下面四幅圖，以圖中小女孩為第一人稱，寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的日記。

注意：1.日記須包括所有圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容，可稍增加細(xì)節(jié)，使日記通順連貫；

2.日記格式已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：希望工程the Hope Project；零花錢pocket money

Tuesday, July 3rd Sunny

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One Possible Version

Tuesday, July 3rd Sunny

This morning our teacher told us something about the Hope Project in class. She said, "Now in the countryside many children still can't go to school because of poverty. Can you help them?"

After school, I went home. When I entered my room, I saw the little box in which I kept my pocket money. Though I wanted to buy what I needed, I decided to give away my money to the children who are eager to go to school. I began to write a letter to them at once. Having finished writing it, I went to the post office and posted all my pocket money.

I feel very happy today because I've done a good deed

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇看圖作文，要求以所給的四副圖畫(huà)為內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇日記。根據(jù)提示的信息可知，文章應(yīng)寫(xiě)成記敘文，內(nèi)容包括：為什么要捐款、如何捐款和捐款后的感受三個(gè)方面。本文是對(duì)做過(guò)的事情的述，所以以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，用第一人稱。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要充分發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)?shù)奶砑幼约旱挠^點(diǎn)，使文章內(nèi)容豐滿，并達(dá)到要求的字?jǐn)?shù)。此外為了提高文章檔次，還要注意使用多種句式和高級(jí)詞匯，并添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞讓行文流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)使用了三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山地點(diǎn)明捐款的原因。第二段描述了我捐款的過(guò)程。第三段描寫(xiě)了做好事后的心情。本文的亮點(diǎn)是運(yùn)用了復(fù)雜的句式如定語(yǔ)從句，狀語(yǔ)從句和現(xiàn)在分詞等，提升了文章的檔次；because of 、be eager to 、I feel very happy because...等結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用也為文章增添了亮色。

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