Question

【題目】 書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，期末獲評(píng)年級(jí)“進(jìn)步之星”。你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部邀請(qǐng)你做一個(gè)勵(lì)志的英語(yǔ)演講。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇標(biāo)題為：“Time And Tide Wait For No Man” (機(jī)不可失，時(shí)不再來(lái))的演講詞，內(nèi)容須包括:

1.你對(duì)該格言的理解感悟;

2.體現(xiàn)該格言含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷;

3.表達(dá)對(duì)其他同學(xué)的希望。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100字左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 演講稿開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

4. 參考詞匯：進(jìn)步之星：“Star of Progress”

Dear fellow students,

It's my great honor to be invited here to give a speech. The topic of my speech today is “Time and tide wait for no man”.

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That’s all.Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

one possible version

Dear fellow students,

It's my great honor to be invited here to give a speech. The topic of my speech today is “Time and tide wait for no man”.

In my understanding, the proverb means that if we allow the invaluable time to waste, it never comes back to you. As a Senior Three student, time is limited for study, so none can afford to waste time.

I still remember I slipped away the golden time in playing two years ago, as a consequence of which I fell far behind others. Realizing that opportunity seldom knocks twice, I seized every moment to study. Gradually I made great progress and was awarded the honorable title of “Star of Progress”.

Dear fellows, with Gaokao drawing near, we should not be content with what we have done. Value your time from now on and it will bring you benefits.

That’s all.Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱作文，根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)就是主要內(nèi)容。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照提示的三個(gè)方面（1.你對(duì)該格言的理解感悟;2.體現(xiàn)該格言含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷;3.表達(dá)對(duì)其他同學(xué)的希望。）的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該主要用一般現(xiàn)在和過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如Realizing that…，which 引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)with Gaokao drawing near。此外還有短語(yǔ)afford to、made great progress和be content with等的使用。連詞as，and，so 使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。