【題目】 書(shū)面表達(dá)

Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay on the topic of loving our parents.

Your essay should meet the requirements below:

1. Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed.

2. Draw a conclusion and give your comments on the cartoon.

3. Word limit: 100-- 120 words.

【答案】

A possible version

As is vividly shown in the picture, old parents are sitting at table, disappointed.

Although they receive a lot of presents from their children, no one comes back to celebrate with them. They feel very miserable and have no appetite, since what they want most is not such material stuffs but the care and love from their children and grandchildren.

Nowadays, young men look so busy and independent in modern society that they will never feel free to live with their parents. They move out and mind their own business every day. On usual days, they would not like to take their time to visit their parents with the excuses of busyness. On some festival days, they probably share a little time to drop in on their parents or even just send some presents but don’t show up personally like what the cartoon above illustrates. They think that presents can represent their love, however, to the parents, who overcame a lot of difficulties to bring them up, those stuffs are far from what they really hope for.

Therefore, however busy we may be, we should spend more time accompanying our parents. Considering their selfless love, we should return them the same from the bottom of our heart.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于看圖寫(xiě)作，以關(guān)愛(ài)父母為話題。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：（1）認(rèn)真讀圖,弄清大意：讀圖時(shí)要充分理解圖畫(huà)所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，弄清圖中的人物在干什么。(2) 理出要點(diǎn)，擬定提綱：讀圖之后，要根據(jù)圖畫(huà)表達(dá)的主要內(nèi)容，理出表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)。列出要點(diǎn)時(shí)要注意分清主次。(3) 緊扣要點(diǎn)，擴(kuò)寫(xiě)成文：在列出要點(diǎn)后，依據(jù)已經(jīng)寫(xiě)出來(lái)的話語(yǔ)擴(kuò)寫(xiě)成一篇短文。擴(kuò)寫(xiě)時(shí)，可運(yùn)用想象適度發(fā)揮，緊扣圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)敘述，連貫通順即可。 （4）根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 (5)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文語(yǔ)義連貫、行文流暢，且立意較深，并且句式結(jié)構(gòu)多樣化。如：As is vividly shown in the picture, old parents are sitting at table, disappointed.“disappointed”在句中獨(dú)立使用作狀語(yǔ)�！癆lthough they receive a lot of presents from their children”中“although”引導(dǎo)讓步分句。以及“who overcame a lot of difficulties to bring them up”是“who”引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)，如：not…but, with the excuse of, drop in on sb., etc.,大大增強(qiáng)了文章的可讀性。

練習(xí)冊(cè)系列答案
相關(guān)習(xí)題

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：

【題目】近期，由董卿主持的《朗讀者》節(jié)目廣受歡迎，其中的兩封家書(shū)更是引起觀眾的關(guān)注。為此，許多人提議在生活中應(yīng)使用手寫(xiě)書(shū)信作為交流工具。此提議在你校學(xué)生中引起廣泛討論。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合圖表用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

支持理由

1. 手寫(xiě)信有助于表達(dá)情感；

2. 手寫(xiě)信有助于規(guī)范學(xué)生書(shū)寫(xiě)；

反對(duì)理由

1. 手寫(xiě)信浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和紙張；

2. 手寫(xiě)信已過(guò)時(shí)；

你的觀點(diǎn)

......

......

注意：

1）作文應(yīng)涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意銜接與連貫。

2）詞數(shù)150詞左右。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3）作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

With the program Readers becoming popular recently, two handwritten letters read in it drew the audience’s attention. ______________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：

【題目】

【1】What is this?

A. Millie Brown's school report. B. Millie Brown's shopping list.

C. Millie Brown's homework list. D. Millie Brown's study plan.

【2】How many men teachers does Millie have?

A. Two. B. Three.

C. Five. D. Eight.

【3】Who thinks that Millie says a lot in class?

A. Miss Gold. B. Mr Rock.

C. Miss Lee. D. Mr Jones.

【4】What does the underlined word "disappointing" mean?

A. 令人失望的 B. 令人滿意的

C. 令人高興的 D. 令人生氣的

【5】Millie worked well this term but

A. she has to win the City Fashion Design Prize next term

B. she can work harder and do better next term

C. Mrs Green thinks Millie doesn't try her best

D. she is careless in music lessons.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：

【題目】If anything can be said about recordbreaking globetrotter (環(huán)球旅行家) Graham Hughes, it's that— throughout his travels— he's always kept his feet firmly on the ground.

The 33yearold adventurer, from Liverpool, has become the first person to visit all 201 countries in the world without using a plane.

Hughes used buses, taxis, trains and his own two feet to travel 160,000 miles in exactly 1,426 days — all on a shoestring(資金微薄) of just $100 a week.

He spent four days “crossing open ocean in a leaky (漏的) boat” to reach Cape Verde on the North Atlantic, was jailed for a week in the Congo for being mistaken as a “spy”， and was arrested trying to “sneak (溜；偷偷地做) into” Russia.

And yesterday Graham Hughes trudged (長(zhǎng)途跋涉) into Juba, the capital of South Sudan, to end the epic fouryear journey that began in his hometown of Liverpool on New Year's Day 2009.

“I love travel, and I guess my reason for doing it was that I wanted to see if this could be done, by one person traveling on a shoestring，” he told the Christian Science Monitor. “I think I also wanted to show that the world is not some big, scary place, but in fact it is full of people who want to help you even if you are a stranger.”

Guinness has now confirmed that Hughes, who filmed the expedition for a documentary and raised money for charity Water Aid, has achieved the world record.

“The main feeling today is just one of intense gratitude to every person around the world who helped me get here, by giving me a lift, letting me stay on their couch, or pointing me in the right direction，” Hughes added.

【1】Which of the following is NOT described Graham Hughes?

A. Globetrotter.

B. Adventurer.

C. The first person traveling around the world not using a plane.

D. Scientist.

【2】Which of the following is NOT true according to the text?

A. When he traveled on the ocean, his boat was leaking water.

B. He was put into prison because of being considered a spy in the Congo.

C. He was caught in Russia because he stole something.

D. It was in South Sudan that he ended his epic fouryear journey.

【3】Why did Hughes make the world record that he had achieved into the film — the expedition for a documentary?

A. Because he wanted to be remembered by people all over the world.

B. Because he wanted to raise money for charity Water Aid.

C. Because he only wanted to record his experience.

D. Because he wanted to earn money.

【4】What can we learn from the last paragraph?

A. When he traveled all over the world, he got a lot of help from different people.

B. He often sleeps on the coach.

C. He often points the direction for others.

D. He is grateful to the people who have helped him.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Teenagers often have problems with English. Yesterday we hold a discussion about what to learn English well. We came up with some suggestion. For example, some of us thought it was important to take the active part in classroom activities, because we could learn a lot of during the activities. Some agreed watching American films could a good way to improve listening and speaking skills. Others suggested read English novels to practice English.

As for me, I prefer listening careful to teachers in class. What’s more, writing to your pen pal in America helps me much with my English. I hope all of us can found our own ways to learn English well.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My grandpa used to be a teacher who is retired now. he has been living the busy and active life, going online, writing articles for newspapers, but attending academic conferences all over the country. He also had many hobbies, such as growing flowers at home, collecting stamps and coins, and especial drinking tea. There are various tea sets and almost all kinds tea in his home, most of that I can’t name.

My grandpa is so very crazy about tea that he can’t live with enjoying tea several times a day. He once told me he would be sleepy without tea. I often help making tea and drink together with me. I love my grandpa.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：

【題目】孩子的成長(zhǎng)和教育是社會(huì)熱議的話題,現(xiàn)今父母包攬一切、孩子過(guò)度依賴等現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重。請(qǐng)閱讀下面的漫畫(huà)，按要求用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文。

內(nèi)容要求：1.描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容； 2.分析漫畫(huà)所揭示的問(wèn)題； 3.提出你的看法。

注意：

1.短文開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；

3.詞數(shù)120左右;

4.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。

參考詞匯:pave the way

From the picture,we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：

【題目】Who could have imagined that a treadmill（跑步機(jī)）on wheels would one day become a thing?!? Lopifit is an unusual means of transportation that allows you to power an electric bicycle by walking on a treadmill.

Lopifit founder Bruin Bergmeester says it all started when he asked himself the question “How can I use a treadmill outdoors?” He finally came up with a new design, adding an electric motor, and the Lopifit was born. It’s similar to an electric bicycle in that the motor only works when the rider puts power in as well. The Lopifit senses when you walk on the treadmill and uses the motor to turn a drive chain at the back of the treadmill, helping you reach a top speed of 17 miles per hour.

To use the Lopifit, simply turn on the battery（電池）and use your foot to slide the treadmill backwards and start the motor. Then get on and enjoy the ride! If you need speed, just walk on the treadmill, and if you want to coast（慣性滑行）, all you have to do is stay still and admire the view. To stop, you have two hand breaks.

The Lopifit first hit the streets in 2014 and, unsurprisingly, became a hit overnight. That was actually quite challenging for the company, because it started getting calls for orders, but it was nowhere near ready for mass production. The unique treadmill bicycle could be bought this year, and Lopifit is struggling to keep up with demand, although the price is up to $2,115.

Some people consider this means of transportation stupid and unnecessary, although there is a very loyal fan-base of so-called Lopifitters. They simply believe that if you’re going to walk, you might as well do it the old-fashioned way.

But the Lopifit does have the special advantage of helping you “walk” really fast without much effort, or walking at cycling speed, if you will.

【1】Lopifit is an electric bicycle which ________.

A. can be powered by the drive chain

B. can work without an electric motor

C. works when you walk on the treadmill

D. stops when you slide the treadmill forward

【2】What is Paragraph 3 mainly about?

A. The design of a Lopifit. B. The function of a Lopifit.

C. The structure of a Lopifit. D. The operation of a Lopifit.

【3】What is probably the author’s attitude towards Lopifit?

A. Confident. B. Concerned.

C. Curious. D. Doubtful.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語(yǔ) 來(lái)源： 題型：

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假段定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有

10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(), 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

The new term is coming! It's time for school. Last term, I make little effort on my English, but my grades were not satisfying. During the holiday, I realized English was of great important and made up my mind to make a progress. My plan goes as follows: for one thing, I will learn new words for at least 20 minutes every morning and recite a l00-words paragraph; for another, I will try to be actively in class. Besides, on my spare time, I will read more books about different topics open my mind. I think I can improve me a lot in this way, because that there is a will, there is a Way.

查看答案和解析>>

同步練習(xí)冊(cè)答案