Question

【題目】書面表達，生活中我們都需要朋友，我們該結交怎樣的朋友，不同的人有不同的看法。請認真閱讀下面的引語(quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。

A true friend is a source of strength and hope.

—Jonathan Lockwood Huie

內(nèi)容要求：

1．談談你對該引語的理解；

2．你的相關經(jīng)歷；

3．恰當?shù)慕Y尾。

注意：1.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；

3．詞數(shù)100左右。

This quotation from Jonathan Lockwood Huie tells us that_________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

This quotation from Jonathan Lockwood Huie tells us that real friends can give us strength and hope when we are in trouble and real friends can benefit from each other. We need such friends who can point out our mistakes directly and who have the same life goals as us. Once I failed again and again in my math and lost interest in it, it was my best friend who encouraged me not to give up and offered help in time. With his kind and selfless help, I gradually caught up with others.

So I say we need friends but what we need most is a friend that can rich our life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是英語應用文寫作。文章要求考生根據(jù)如何結交朋友寫出自己的想法。故用第一人稱。文章要點全，語法知識應用靈活，且使用得當，堪稱佳作。例如文中使用了in trouble，benefit from，point out，again and again，encouraged sb to do，give up，in time.，With his kind and selfish help，caught up with等短語，同時還使用了定語從句it was my best friend who encouraged me...，連詞的用法也很到位，彰顯作者扎實的基本功。