8．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．作文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Mrs．Wilson，
I'm going out shopping and won't come back soon．I have taken with me the four book which you asked me return to the City Library．On about 1o'clock this afternoon，your neighbor Tracy come to visit you．Looked worried，she said she couldn't drink coffee with you this evening．She also said that her father were ill and that she would have to take care of him．She felt terrible sorry and promised to visit you before her father got better．By the way，she has already been told Susan and Grace about this change，so you needn't call themselves．
Yours
Liu Mei．

分析 這是Liu Mei寫給Mrs．Wilson的一封信，信中Liu Mei告訴Mrs．Wilson她要出去買東西，順便把Mrs．Wilson要她還給圖書館的四本書還上．她還告訴Mrs．Wilson下午一點(diǎn)鐘Tracy來過，Tracy因?yàn)楦赣H生病今晚不能和Mrs．Wilson一起喝咖啡了，并且Tracy已經(jīng)把這個(gè)變化告訴了Susan 和 Grace．

解答 Mrs．Wilson，
I'm going out shopping and won't come back soon．I have taken with me the four bookwhich you asked me∧return to the City Library．On about 1o'clock this afternoon，your neighbor Tracy cometo visit you．Lookedworried，she said she couldn't drink coffee with you this evening．She also said that her father wereill and that she would have to take care of him．She felt terrible sorry and promised to visit you before her father got better．By the way，she has already been told Susan and Grace about this change，so you needn't call themselves．
Yours
詳解：
1．book改為books；考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)，book為可數(shù)名詞，前面有數(shù)詞four，所以要用復(fù)數(shù)形式books．
2．return前面加to；考查動(dòng)詞不定式，ask sb to do sth是固定搭配，意為"要求某人做某事"．
3．On改為At；考查介詞，on表時(shí)間時(shí)指在"某一天，某個(gè)節(jié)日或星期幾"，當(dāng)時(shí)間具體到某一點(diǎn)鐘，某一刻時(shí)介詞要用at．
4．come改為came；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，結(jié)合上下文可知，這個(gè)動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過去，故用一般過去時(shí)．
5．Looked改為L(zhǎng)ooking；考查分詞作狀語(yǔ)，句子主語(yǔ)she與動(dòng)詞look存在邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作狀語(yǔ)．
6．were改為was；考查主謂一致，句子的主語(yǔ)為her father，所用動(dòng)詞要用單數(shù)形式was．
7．terrible改為terribly；考查副詞，這里用副詞terribly作狀語(yǔ)，修飾形容sorry．
8．before改為after；考查介詞，結(jié)合上下文分析，句意應(yīng)為"她承諾在她父親的病好了之后就會(huì)來看你"，所以把before改為after．
9．got改為gets；考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，這里用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表示將來．
10．themselves改為them；考查代詞，分析句意為"你不必再給他們打電話了"，這里的代詞them指代前面的Susan and Grace．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)當(dāng)中，首先要從整體掌握短文大意，結(jié)合上下文語(yǔ)境并充分運(yùn)用平時(shí)掌握的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，習(xí)慣用法，短語(yǔ)搭配等對(duì)短文進(jìn)行分析，以便找出文中的錯(cuò)誤所在，并加以修正．

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